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A Little 'White' Lie, Wink Wink

With my white pumpkin I’m going to bake A pumpkin pie and say it’s cheesecake It’s “vanilla bean” Since it’s white like cheese - If only they’ll take the bait plate! Unsuspecting the pumpkin inside - I tap tap my foot, just take a bite! With “cake” in their mouths Their taste buds abound! Eyebrows rising in shocked surprise! 11/8/11 Received 4th place in "What No Orange Pumpkin" contest

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/17/2011 10:07:00 PM

Congrats Susan on another grand win for this wow wonder write luv.. awesome title.too..

John Freeman

Date: 11/17/2011 5:08:00 PM

Hey, Nice limeric Susan, Congrats on a worthy win. Agape, Moses

Ralph Taylor

Date: 11/17/2011 4:33:00 PM

Hey, that's dishonest! Congrats, Sue. Great write. Nice going. Kudos. luv Ralph

Joyce Johnson

Date: 11/17/2011 2:36:00 PM

A fun poem. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/17/2011 12:59:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in my "What No Orange Pumpkin" contest Susan. Love, Carol

James Fraser

Date: 11/10/2011 12:49:00 PM

Oh to see their faces when they take a bite. Good luck in the contest Susan :)

Broken Butterfly

Date: 11/9/2011 4:09:00 PM

That would be funny Susan to take a bite thinking you were getting cheesecake and getting pumpkin instead. I cannot remember if I thanked you for my win in your Cheater, Cheater Contest. But I think I did not so I am thanking you now. Thank you. And I am adding you to my list of fav's poet.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/9/2011 5:32:00 AM

Thank you for supporting the contest Susan. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2011 12:17:00 AM

cute playful title and humor, Susan. I enjoyed seeing this though I think the inside must be orange, or IS it?? well, I got many interruptions tonight and instead of getting off here at 10 as planned. here I am at midnight. HOLY cow. MY BAD!!

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/8/2011 8:28:00 PM

Very cleaver and witty write Susan! I really enjoyed your poem tonight, it brought me some much needed cheer! Thank you for writing this just when I needed it! Great job!!