A Little Murder

A LITTLE MURDER

Eight crows sorted themselves 
from the background and settled 
on the wires and naked branches
to sing a November song,

CAW!

Abrupt,
like this chill gust of wind
mustered from behind the hill.
My hand reaches for my collar.

CAW!

A leaf skirls sideways down the lawn
to snag on a nameless bush.

CAW! CAW!

The little murder has imposed on my moment
here when I was thinking of other things:
bread milk, impending winter...
This inconvenient trip to town
interrupted by my fascination for these 
harbingers dressed in black who look down,
waiting,
waiting.

CAW!

They watch me decide to play their game.
the sentinel in the top of that isolate  
persimmon rattles his feathers,
adjusts his stance,
disinterested as I should be
in my quiet evening 
now focused on things 
beyond the plans I’ve made.

CAW!

A lift of wings,  
a fumbling for keys,
gravel crunches on my way to the car,
the door chunks heavy in the silence.
I sit, safe for a moment and
pull into the night.

Copyright
Vol Lindsey
2002

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 8/17/2022 12:20:00 PM
I thought this was great, have three crows that have adopted my home, and demand breakfast and dinner of peanuts. Interesting they seem to keep an eye of us as we drive from home to small shops. They also keep our sidewalk clean and have a relationship with 3 black squirrels. Murder is the name for a group of crows. Not sure about comments from others? see animals that live around you is a good way to connect even during work.?
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Date: 2/19/2022 8:44:00 AM
love this....from the title on through the hasty retreat. Masterfully done Vol
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