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We All Have An Inner Child To Protect AND She Still Has Plenty To Say!

 

 

There is a child in me, she hides way down beneath, the adult in me. She saw awful things, she felt many painful things, and heard many harsh things. The adult in me, always attempts to protect her, but there are times I fail. That is when, the adult in me, cries for the child, that I once was. My tears remember, the pangs of distress, for the child, who can never rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 1/3/2019 2:12:00 AM
I loved this poem, I like to read these poems before I listen the song, then read again while listening to the music!!! very nice indeed!
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 1/3/2019 2:52:00 PM
Thanks Arthur! and Happy New Year!
Date: 12/12/2018 6:18:00 AM
wow....very true, there is a child in every person.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 1/3/2019 2:52:00 PM
Yes and Happy New Year!
Date: 11/25/2018 3:39:00 PM
Heartbreaking poem.. how sad no one was around to save that child.. Deeply expressed..
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Date: 11/27/2018 7:39:00 AM
Thank You!
Date: 11/22/2018 10:21:00 PM
Oh I can so identify with this Vickie! I lost the little girl inside of me to darkness as well... so hard to find her sometimes ...I love the way you have expressed that here :) ...I know horses are not for everyone, but they helped me get back home to my little girl :)
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 11/24/2018 8:42:00 AM
I do love horses Chris and I have read and heard they are very therapeutic. I was around them at different times thru out my life and I do love them so. Thanks for the positive comment as well. Take care, Vickie.
Date: 11/21/2018 2:36:00 PM
Very sweet, Vickie. Heartfelt.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 11/22/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thanks Line, The Video Is One Of My Favorites.
Date: 11/21/2018 1:38:00 PM
This is excellent Vickie..the essence of your poem I found in these lines:that is when, the adult in me, cries for the child she once was.
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Vickie Hurtt - Thayer
Date: 11/22/2018 3:03:00 PM
Thank You Much Vijay, My child in me has suffered much.

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