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A Little Girl

Wearing rented robes and wet with tears Tired and hungry with lifeless eyes No shoes and no hope None at all Life a death sentence at this tender age She sat on a rock, now robbed, even of her tears A butterfly fluttered on by Wings so golden, shining in the suns rays She came to rest on the little girls arm Looking up the butterfly saw the lost soul within Spreading her wings, she danced in the air, saying “Little one with a smile hidden deep Do not fret, God is near” The little girl, with no hope, raped of her happiness Her heart bombed long ago Gave a faint smile She twirled once, her last dance before tumbling of hunger Fainting to the ground while spiraling to the sky Such is the sad moment upon this earth As the butterfly took her up to heaven Notes: I saw a photo of a girl, alone amongst the ruins of bombed Syria, the image made you want to reach out and save this poor soul. I have a sadness that I could not. I had no idea how to express this, until a butterfly whispered in my ear.

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Date: 4/21/2014 4:38:00 AM
You have expressed your feelings well in this poignant poem, inspiring imagery of her being taken off to heaven following the butterfly. This is simply outstanding!
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Date: 4/19/2014 3:15:00 PM
Deep sad true words. I have seen some photos or images. Wars are huge evil..
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Date: 4/18/2014 8:25:00 PM
A very sad write, love the part about the butterfly and her going to heaven. cheri Hey any idea's for a ship wreck poem, need some new ideas. cheri
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Date: 4/14/2014 3:52:00 PM
weeeee.. that's why i unfollowed one of my friends in fb cause of the pictures he sends not because i don't like but it really fills me with sadness and empathy,, :( this well-penned but really it"s touching and heartful... +olive_eloi
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:41:00 PM
Thank you Olive , and yes it is sad, but we have to be strong, so that we can stand and help those less fortunate than us.
Date: 4/14/2014 3:26:00 PM
Is this the poem? I seem to know this little girl well...Lovely poem, Arthur....As always you capture so much in your writes....depth of emotions and pain...passion. How sad...so many have died, and are dying...and the world is silent. Butterflies....I love them! :)
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Eileen Manassian
Date: 4/14/2014 3:31:00 PM
Oh...I'm please it was of some help! :)
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/14/2014 3:30:00 PM
Yes it is Eileen, I had this idea/story on my mind and just didn't know how to go about telling it, until I read your poem about the Butterfly!!! :)
Date: 4/13/2014 5:55:00 PM
This is a beauty of a poem. I collect some things of butterflies. I think that that is one of the most beautiful things that God created for us to enjoy. Thanks for sharing... Lucilla
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 4/17/2014 11:42:00 PM
Gracious Lucilla, I hope there is a butterfly looking over you!!!!
Date: 4/13/2014 7:49:00 AM
- A beautifully written poem, Arthur .... but, heartbreakingly sad .... - *** "- The Madness Of The World -" - Have a nice Sunday :))) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/12/2014 8:01:00 PM
lovely words, so well written...Seren
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