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A Little Birdie Whispered In My Ear

"Time to take the Soup off the stove," a little birdie whispered in my ear: 'Tis the Sabbath Queen that's drawing near." But the Soup's not done, I dared to say in an unpoetic, defiant way The little birdie just looked at me with pity, but not with sympathy Shook his head and moved his beak: "Sabbath's come; the Soup is done. ~ So's all your work for this week!"

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Date: 12/1/2019 10:04:00 AM
Love those "little birdie's"; especially as I get older and more forgetful.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2019 11:04:00 AM
You're not getting older, my dear; your long-term memory's just getting better! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 12/1/2019 9:29:00 AM
Ah, yes, we do need these reminders sometimes.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/1/2019 11:03:00 AM
Thanks for the refreshing comment, Caren! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 12/1/2019 2:03:00 AM
I'm with sandy if the birdie says it then so be it! Loved it Gershon!;)
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Date: 11/30/2019 2:33:00 PM
Gershon, So wise the little birdies of our lives. “The early bird gets the worm, but the second mouse gets the cheese.” -Willie Nelson
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2019 7:14:00 PM
Ah, that Willie! He's truly a great one. Thanks, Raven!! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/30/2019 10:14:00 AM
It is good to honour God and yourself in this way. You have a wise little birdie. Blessings Rick.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2019 7:13:00 PM
I depend on this birdie for important news. Often more reliable than the web. LOL. Thanks, Richard. :) gw
Date: 11/29/2019 9:35:00 PM
if the birdie says so, then i guess you must but know we will be awaiting your return...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2019 7:11:00 PM
Only about a 27 hour absence, though it occurs once weekly. Thanks! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/29/2019 7:13:00 PM
Hi Gershon. The little birdie is a wise one. Did his friend Bubbly Bee offer any advice :) Thanks for sharing this
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2019 7:10:00 PM
'Bubbly Bee' -- That's an absolute scream. You've got me laughing away, Gregory. Thanks for a great comment! Cheers, Gershon
Date: 11/29/2019 4:33:00 PM
So wise... Ann
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/30/2019 7:09:00 PM
Thanks, Ann---and here I thought that this one was strictly for the birds! Smiles, Gershon
Date: 11/29/2019 3:18:00 PM
Nice poem and a wise little bird.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2019 3:21:00 PM
Hey, W.A., Thank you so much for your support! Season's Best, Gershon
Date: 11/29/2019 2:45:00 PM
No worries - the Soup will keep, until next week ;)
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2019 3:20:00 PM
Ha, ha. Correct: No worries -- This soup is gonna get eaten on the Sabbath, my dear!! ~ Watch the birdie...
Date: 11/29/2019 2:26:00 PM
That little birdie could very well be right. Have a great weekend my friend.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 11/29/2019 3:19:00 PM
Thanks, Chris. Seems to me that i should watch the birdie! Cheers, Gershon

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