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A Lingering of Wet Dogs

Neither mad dogs nor Englishmen
rejoice as sunlight growing thin
allows the tidal sands to shift
through moonlight’s vapor growing dim

Yet still the beasts of lolling tongue
huddle with their shaded young
beneath a cloak of crimson red
abandoned nests now left unsung

Whilst I enjoyed this mingled tryst
as lovers passing gently kissed
and danced beneath a smiling sun
embracing moments others missed

Soft rustling limply humid leaves
deny the creep of autumn’s thieves
grey squirrels stalking acorn fields
from high upon a church apse eaves

School children race through tanning grass
rejoicing in their sunset dash
pursuing dusk into the dark 
as dog day’s breath goes panting past



©9/3/2018

for The Dog Days Endure Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 12/2/2018 12:45:00 PM
Your lines in this Rubaiyat are brilliant John! This piece is a favorite of all I have read in this contest. Originality at its best and going into my Faves! Congratulations on your well deserved win! : )
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Date: 12/1/2018 5:58:00 AM
Great Rubaiyat, John. Each stanza hits home I love the third one! Congrats on your placement in the contest...Happy Holidays...Charlie
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John Lawless
Date: 12/1/2018 7:58:00 AM
Hey Charlie, Thanks for popping in to comment
Date: 9/18/2018 11:36:00 AM
Unsung nests! As evocative in the ear as the wet dogs are in the nose!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/18/2018 4:58:00 PM
Hey Stephe, thanks for stopping by to read and comment
Date: 9/5/2018 8:49:00 AM
This is quite good, John-- like the lyrical evocation of nature's endless makeover-- and a great last line!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/18/2018 4:59:00 PM
Yeah, those dog days make us all wish to curl up and pant. thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 9/5/2018 7:44:00 AM
Wow that's good. My best to you in the contest John xomo
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:33:00 AM
stunning creativity in your images, John. I have not even had the time to check out what this contest is all about yet.
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