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A Lingering of Wet Dogs

Neither mad dogs nor Englishmen rejoice as sunlight growing thin allows the tidal sands to shift through moonlight’s vapor growing dim Yet still the beasts of lolling tongue huddle with their shaded young beneath a cloak of crimson red abandoned nests now left unsung Whilst I enjoyed this mingled tryst as lovers passing gently kissed and danced beneath a smiling sun embracing moments others missed Soft rustling limply humid leaves deny the creep of autumn’s thieves grey squirrels stalking acorn fields from high upon a church apse eaves School children race through tanning grass rejoicing in their sunset dash pursuing dusk into the dark as dog day’s breath goes panting past ©9/3/2018 for The Dog Days Endure Poetry Contest

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Date: 12/2/2018 12:45:00 PM
Your lines in this Rubaiyat are brilliant John! This piece is a favorite of all I have read in this contest. Originality at its best and going into my Faves! Congratulations on your well deserved win! : )
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Date: 12/1/2018 5:58:00 AM
Great Rubaiyat, John. Each stanza hits home I love the third one! Congrats on your placement in the contest...Happy Holidays...Charlie
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John Lawless
Date: 12/1/2018 7:58:00 AM
Hey Charlie, Thanks for popping in to comment
Date: 9/18/2018 11:36:00 AM
Unsung nests! As evocative in the ear as the wet dogs are in the nose!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/18/2018 4:58:00 PM
Hey Stephe, thanks for stopping by to read and comment
Date: 9/5/2018 8:49:00 AM
This is quite good, John-- like the lyrical evocation of nature's endless makeover-- and a great last line!
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John Lawless
Date: 9/18/2018 4:59:00 PM
Yeah, those dog days make us all wish to curl up and pant. thanks for stopping to read and comment.
Date: 9/5/2018 7:44:00 AM
Wow that's good. My best to you in the contest John xomo
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Date: 9/5/2018 1:33:00 AM
stunning creativity in your images, John. I have not even had the time to check out what this contest is all about yet.
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