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A Lilit Poem - Evolution

EVOLUTION ~~~~~~~~~~ Waves crash, ripples calm. Calm the raging sea! Sea: Evolution starts! First life, no hearts; no but, flora imparts fresh air. New life can strut, were nearly there! There is some time yet! Yet to come, mankind! Mankind, a big faux pas The worse by far you'll twig. Yes a faux pas, a mess! A self made rig, pollution, stress! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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Date: 2/16/2018 4:52:00 PM
From a gurgling blob to where we are today, but did we take a wrong turn somewhere. ? Tom
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Mick Talbot
Date: 2/16/2018 6:04:00 PM
In a nutshell 2 come mind; the industrial revolution, and religion. N.B. The nutshell? Coconut sized, and the reasons it contains are manyfold, indeed a many-forked road! Mick

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