A Lightbulb Went Off

Dawn is here the stars have gone Her crack was heard many miles Now the lightbulb has gone off Reform is now due A common thought but an Uncommon idea arose What is that idea? Let there be peace on this earth Common_let peace start within
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
April 2, 2012 at 7:29 PM
Great lightbulb thoughts, Sara. Don't you love when it goes off in your mind and you know just what to write?!
K Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 3:51 PM
So enjoyed reading this piece, Sara...and the display at the end was so neat :)
Sivey Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 12:16 PM
This is a wonderful write that I have read here! I really enjoyed this poem that displays the sky and stars! I love your poem Sara! Great Work!!
Onclaud Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 10:50 AM
a delightful read, sara.. how uplifting!... i like the way you did those fancy symbols.. plese read the blogs of tracie and gail regarding putting pics on poems.. how are you?.. karter??:) happy sunday and huggs!
Horne Avatar
April 1, 2012 at 9:44 AM
lovely write, sara
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