A Lifetime Tradition

Grandfather relaxed
While I cleaned his grimed toenails—
He was a tugboat captain.
It was tradition,
As soon as he fell asleep,
I painted his toenails red.

© February 22, 2012
Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Written for Poetry Soup Member Contest: Sedoka me any subject 	
Sponsored by: Russell Sivey
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March 2, 2012 at 9:04 PM
DANE... CONGRATULATIONS ..ON YOUR WONDERFUL WIN~ Have yourself a very nice night ;-)*always..pd
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March 2, 2012 at 5:31 PM
Cute one..Got a chuckle..Congrats on your win..Way to go..Sara
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February 29, 2012 at 9:30 PM
Congratulations!
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February 29, 2012 at 7:35 PM
Congrats on your win, Dane Ann! Love, Kim
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February 29, 2012 at 11:01 AM
great write Dane Ann...enjoyed it a lot. Congrats!!
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February 29, 2012 at 10:25 AM
hehe, this is so cute Dane Ann! Congratulations on your win ;) love Wilma
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February 29, 2012 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in Russell's "Sedoka Me Any Subject" contest Dane Ann. Love, Carol
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February 28, 2012 at 10:37 PM
another great write, dane... you rule and congrats on your great win!..:) huggs
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February 28, 2012 at 7:18 PM
congrats Dane Ann on a dynamic win for this interesting Sedoka luv..
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February 23, 2012 at 10:56 PM
LOL. I would have done the same! If this is true, what an awful tradition. I would find a podiatrist who makes housecalls. A fun read tonight...thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda
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February 24, 2012 at 3:15 AM
It is true...and it was a tradition...his children, as I understand, did the same thing. I was taught at a very young age...of course by my grandmother. LOL It was NOT an awful tradition, though. He always laughed heartily. And he did NOT TAKE IT OFF! When he was out on the boat working, sometimes for weeks at a time, his red toenails reminded him of how much we loved him and how much fun we always had when he was home. When he died, he had red toenails, which my grandmother insisted were to be left red. I had painted them red. Granddad had been my favorite person on earth.
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