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A Life Can Change

Beautiful day
Ocean
Blue sky
A little piece of paradise 

Beckoned by the waves
Come out and play
Frolic 
Be a child again
Crash through my waves
Feel my strength
A perfect day

You feel in control
Your body so strong
As you ride along
Upon her waves
Exhilarated 
Feeling free
Unaware of destiny

In a moment
A life can change
Sushine turns to rain
You don't feel anything
Not even pain
The ocean displays her darker side
Takes you on a different ride
You come crashing down
As her waves pound
Pushed in circles
Like a rag doll
We feel mighty before we fall
Soft waves become a wall

In a moment
From the corner of your eye
You see Jesus's face
As your heart keeps pace
Will he rescue you
You say a prayer
So glad he is there
All others unaware

Holding your breath
Unable to move
It's time to let go
What will happen you don't know
Yet you are not afraid
The lights go out
As you're tossed about

Jesus takes you in his arms
Rests you on the shore
Not in danger any more
The ocean lets out her roar
She is denied your soul
It's not added to her collection
You're under Gods protection

When you open your eyes
You are paralyzed
But still alive
Thankful
You can breath 
See
Pray
Talk
You're placed in angels hands
A new adventure begins
Like a child again
Starting from the beginning
Not in control
On a journey to be whole
Learning to walk
Regaining what was lost
Willing to pay the cost
Working through the pain
Seeing the sunshine not the rain
You will be strong once again
You are in our Savior's hands

My friend Charlie went on a holiday to Hawaii with his girlfriend and on the second
day while body surfing he was taken by a wave and crashed on the bottom he had no
feeling below his neck and could not move any part of his body. Out of the corner of
his eye he saw Jesus as he was being tossed about. He could no longer hold his breath 
and blanked out. Before he knew it he was waking on the beach and people were 
coming to help him. Miraculously after a day feeling and movement started returning
to him. He is on the road of recovery and is now walking and moving about. He is
truly a walking miracle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 5/31/2013 11:58:00 AM
That was incredible. And that poem was incredible too. I felt extremely moved reading it. The descriptions and the feelings felt so real. So glad that your friend is doing better!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/31/2013 10:17:00 PM
We are very happy for him. I can't imagine what it would me like to be paralyzed from the neck down.
Date: 5/30/2013 1:39:00 AM
What an awesome story, Rick... what makes it more amazing is the fact that it actually happened. Miracles don't happen everyday! This will be something to tell for years to come... I bet your friend has a brand new outlook on life. Best wishes on a swift recovery!
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2013 6:17:00 AM
Thanks Tim, it truly is a miricale.
Date: 5/29/2013 9:54:00 PM
OH! What an experience. What an amazing miracle! What a testimony to share! What a wonderful poem, Richard. However, He doesn't always perform a miracle. You know of Joni Erickson Tada? Remained a quadriplegic after a diving accident. Became a famous mouth artist who signs every painting with PTL...Praise the Lord. She has a group for the disabled...Joni and Friends. Whatever and however He chooses to work, He knows what He is doing! :)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2013 6:19:00 AM
He uses our weakness in ways that we can only imagine.
Date: 5/29/2013 8:03:00 PM
Praise God for your friends miracle Richard...
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/30/2013 6:20:00 AM
I certainly do! Thanks for commenting.
Date: 5/29/2013 4:06:00 PM
an amazizing and miraculous story......glad it turned to be a happy ending.....best wishes
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2013 4:42:00 PM
Me too!
Date: 5/29/2013 3:44:00 PM
I have to agree with Drake about the relief felt at the end. You made it so real I had shivers up my spine. Good write, Richard. My very best to your friend. Licia :-)
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2013 4:45:00 PM
Thanks Licia, I had no idea my friend had gone through all this till yesterday. He had gone away for spring break and this was the second day of their trip. 9 days in the hospital there until he was moved back to Canada.
Date: 5/29/2013 2:25:00 PM
I am very, very relieved for this ending. This was a very gripping tale. May the sun continue to shine upon him and his recovery.
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2013 2:27:00 PM
Thanks Drake. He just left my place and it is amazing how far he has come in just a few months.
Date: 5/29/2013 12:30:00 PM
completley consumed by the words and went on a journey through reading this.Peaceful moment that I needed.take care
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2013 1:31:00 PM
Thanks Colleen, we can all use those peaceful moments
Date: 5/29/2013 9:43:00 AM
A gripping piece with a powerful element of surprise as gleaned from your author's notesyes, we do not know what could happen next, yet light always shines.. lovely work as always, richard... :) huggs
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Richard Lamoureux
Date: 5/29/2013 1:33:00 PM
Thanks Nette you are kind. I appreciate your kind words.

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