A Letter

My beloved,

You smoke too much
Your ceiling is a canvas to it
Do not be silly and reverse my statement. Arrogance.
If it was me then it would be art
A fresco inspirational of a new shift and vortexes coiling
I would demand a proclaimation of brilliance and
Slowly recount under amber silences
Art is art, by artist or by lunatic

You smoke too much
You make a Chernobyl skyline of yourself

I know every crack in that damned ceiling
I know every aspect of the room 
There is no corner I have not searched and no vase I have not smashed
I'm quite a World War too
Regardless we are clung, half-witted and thumbed into blurs

You do not move me
I remain completely unchallenged

I did once want to 
I remain uncompromised, not for lack of trying

These are volatile times and I get bored so easily
I was a reflection and I wanted something precious
A shadow who dreamt of falling ridiculously into light
However, I'm afraid it's come to my attention that I'm
Letting go and letting god

He can do the nasty business as I recount
The mirror image photography of the Napalm-splattered, star-spattered ceiling.

Good bye.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Ryusaka Avatar
July 25, 2009 at 1:13 PM
Hey you. You writin' or you wanna talk on yahoo??
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July 24, 2009 at 8:45 PM
I LOVE this... so condescending and almost scornfully amused. You capture the tone so well with your words... and your WORDS and PHRASES! Jesus christ... you amaze me. I love this, "I would demand a proclamation of brilliance and slowly recount under amber silences art is art, by artist or by lunatic." Plus of course star-spattered (!) and World War too... basically you're amazing. =] <3 Daffy
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