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A Lesson For Life

You should admit your mistakes and eat humble pie - a much better option than sour grapes' juice in your eye! Life or Death Epigram Poetry Contest Sponsored by Kevin Shaw 7/18/18
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Date: 8/2/2018 12:59:00 AM
Congratulations on a deserving win, Jan. :) hugs
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/2/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Moon Flower:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/1/2018 11:09:00 PM
Lol! Congratulations on your win. :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/2/2018 7:46:00 AM
Thanks Susan:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/1/2018 1:19:00 PM
Congrats on your win Jan
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 1:26:00 PM
Thanks Joseph:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 8/1/2018 7:51:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Jan with your cleverly written epigram. :))
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 8:07:00 AM
Thanks roy:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 10:01:00 PM
Congrats, Jan! Yes, terrible to stay sour!
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 4:58:00 AM
Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 8:41:00 PM
Good one, Jan. Congrats on your win.
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Jan Allison
Date: 8/1/2018 4:57:00 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 4:54:00 PM
:) Back with a big congratulations on your win, Jan.... Hugs Eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 5:17:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 4:31:00 PM
Very wise words indeed! Love it! Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 4:39:00 PM
Thanks Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/31/2018 4:16:00 PM
Heh heh, indeed! Cute one ;)) Congrats on your win! xomo
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/31/2018 4:18:00 PM
Thanks Mo:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/21/2018 11:17:00 AM
GOOD one, Jan! Janice
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2018 11:58:00 AM
Thanks Janice:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/20/2018 7:30:00 AM
Great epigram, Jan. Humble pie is a personal favorite.// Warren :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 2:23:00 PM
It tastes very nice with whipped cream lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/19/2018 11:00:00 AM
Funny! Your epigram features sour grapes and mine sour apple! Like it!
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 2:22:00 PM
We are both fruity Kim lol:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/19/2018 9:48:00 AM
Love the impact of the verse. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Eve
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 2:22:00 PM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 5:32:00 PM
So true! I like it.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much Cas:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 4:13:00 PM
A powerful epigram, there are a lot of people that should take note! Good luck in the contest Jan hugs Mick
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Date: 7/20/2018 2:21:00 PM
I try to own up to mistakes Mick as the truth always comes back to haunt you in the end:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 3:11:00 PM
- Some people will never admit their mistakes ... I know ... and I have learned ... - Excellent written, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/20/2018 2:20:00 PM
Sadly we both know that one Anne-Lise:-(hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 3:07:00 PM
Great advice Dear Jan...To be humble enough to admit a mistake..Its not easy at times..but definitely leaves one more serene once done..Great post .In a few words you transmitted a powerful message.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 2:20:00 PM
Thanks Charma, hope you and the family are all well, good to see you back on soup too many are leaving or no longer active like they once were:-)hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 2:40:00 PM
Maybe I no longer post on the site, but I'm delighted to comment on the poetry of my friends and this one should strike loudly in the ears of those who are never willing to admit when they're wrong. So very nicely communicated by you, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2018 2:56:00 PM
Wish a family member could read it Lin, but even then it would fall on deaf ears:-( Don't be a stranger:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 12:40:00 PM
Great Epigram. It rings of truth. Enjoyed immensely.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2018 2:00:00 PM
Thanks Frank:-) hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 8:14:00 AM
In this day and age Jan, Sorry seems to be the buzz word. Yet i still agree with your wonderful words.
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Date: 7/18/2018 8:15:00 AM
It's easy to say sorry but I wonder how many truly regret their actions and are merely playing lip service:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 7:59:00 AM
Great one Jan , I do try and admit my mistakes ( depends who the person is though lol ) Good Luck. Tom
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2018 8:02:00 AM
Oh me too Tom far better to hold up your hands and admit as the more porkie pies you tell do catch up with you in the end - got a relation think she has a degree in lying:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 7:49:00 AM
So true, Jan Humble pie tastes much, much better than a sour grape...Good Luck in the contest. Hugs // Charlie
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Date: 7/18/2018 7:56:00 AM
Thanks Charles you are so right:-) I don't like to see folk try and cover up their mistakes and look humble - it is not the truth yet they still try to hide it:-( hugs jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 7:24:00 AM
Good one Jan! :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Heidi:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 7/18/2018 7:18:00 AM
Great one, Jan.
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Jan Allison
Date: 7/18/2018 7:44:00 AM
Thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx
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