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A Lesser Man

I am not the man my father is, the days of the years of my Christian life have not yet attained to his My obedience don’t measure up to the length that my father’s righteousness does His strength, his courage ... Lord knows I need more of I didn’t worship the One True God with the same fervor my father did His faith, his zeal ... Lord knows mine was so much less than his A lesser man am I, far less than my father be His spiritual eyes do look farther than I can see Not honoring God right, giving lip service half-heartedly An unworthy son am I, oh woe, woe ... woe is me! But God’s mercy flowed down from a bloody crucifixed hill Covered me with His grace, gave me a goodly portion of my father’s will Made me more of a godly man than I ever was Gave me my father’s integrity, gave me his loving charity ... Lord knows I don’t deserve to be cast in the image thereof The day I fell on my knees with tears of godly repentance — my father and me, we became one and the same Expressly, I do testify: no more a lesser man am I Our spiritual DNA is now one and the same, I’m blessed to fully inherit his good name

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Date: 1/1/2018 4:23:00 AM
Very deep poem Freddie my friend. But you are your own individual and you set the world afire in your own way without following in anyone's footsteps. In the end as you say in your poem your DNA and your Dad's became one...Maria
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Date: 12/29/2017 6:38:00 PM
Freddie, your poems are incredibly unique. It's like diving into the deep end of the pool, catching words on the way down, touching the bottom and swimming back up to breathe. You are your own person. The very true love you convey here for your father is all too evident -you are definitely unique and your own person though. Honourable, deep heart tribute to your father. For some reason, I'm thinking of a Grace Jones song. "Williams Blood" - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6S8bMWJHUD8
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Date: 12/29/2017 12:37:00 AM
Your father raised you the right way Freddie. You turned into an amazing man and poet. You are luckier than you might realize though.
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Date: 12/28/2017 7:45:00 AM
Very spiritual and inspirational poem written with your usual force of emotions....well written, Freddie.
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Date: 12/28/2017 4:17:00 AM
Man to man is so unjust...But in your case it's DNA... He and you are a must...Different styles...I reflected on my father too...Nice poem
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