A Lesser Man



I am not the man my father is,
the days of the years of my Christian life
have not yet attained to his
My obedience don’t measure up
to the length 
that my father’s righteousness does
His strength,
his courage ...
Lord knows I need more of
I didn’t worship the One True God
with the same fervor my father did
His faith,
his zeal ...
Lord knows mine was so much less than his
A lesser man am I,
far less than my father be
His spiritual eyes 
do look farther than I can see
Not honoring God right,
giving lip service half-heartedly
An unworthy son am I,
oh woe, woe ... woe is me!
But God’s mercy flowed down
from a bloody crucifixed hill
Covered me with His grace,
gave me a goodly portion of my father’s will
Made me more of a godly man
than I ever was
Gave me my father’s integrity,
gave me his loving charity ...
Lord knows I don’t deserve
to be cast in the image thereof
The day I fell on my knees
with tears of godly repentance — 
my father and me,
we became one and the same
Expressly, I do testify:
no more a lesser man am I
Our spiritual DNA is now one and the same,
I’m blessed to fully inherit his good name
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Williams Avatar
January 1, 2018 at 4:23 AM
Very deep poem Freddie my friend. But you are your own individual and you set the world afire in your own way without following in anyone's footsteps. In the end as you say in your poem your DNA and your Dad's became one...Maria
Lovejoy-Burton Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 6:38 PM
Freddie, your poems are incredibly unique. It's like diving into the deep end of the pool, catching words on the way down, touching the bottom and swimming back up to breathe. You are your own person. The very true love you convey here for your father is all too evident -you are definitely unique and your own person though. Honourable, deep heart tribute to your father. For some reason, I'm thinking of a Grace Jones song. "Williams Blood" - https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6S8bMWJHUD8
Swartz Avatar
December 29, 2017 at 12:37 AM
Your father raised you the right way Freddie. You turned into an amazing man and poet. You are luckier than you might realize though.
Pandit Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 7:45 AM
Very spiritual and inspirational poem written with your usual force of emotions....well written, Freddie.
Michael Avatar
December 28, 2017 at 4:17 AM
Man to man is so unjust...But in your case it's DNA... He and you are a must...Different styles...I reflected on my father too...Nice poem
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