A Legendary Love

- “Oh, no! not in spring-time! Summer, winter or fall! No, never could I leave you at all!” From the song “If Ever I Would Leave You” from the movie Camelot https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqTveSQoKZE A Legendary Love In a special place, Camelot, a legendary love blazed hot - forbidden love that came to naught for Guinevere and Lancelot, King Author’s brightest, boldest knight who sought the love of the king’s bride! Passion could not be denied although Guinevere so tried. One kiss - their love took flight! A spell was cast; now more alive, than ever, they could not deprive themselves of that which made them thrive - that magic for which they would strive to meet in secret, lest they burst! Into each other’s arms they’d fall. Joyously they gave their all, for at passion’s beck and call were two with endless thirst! Her hair of gold; her face so fair. Sir Lancelot could never tear himself away from their affair, and Guinevere, how could she bear to let her soul mate walk away? They lay when leaves or snow would fly; or ‘neath spring or summer sky, proving passion could not die. What price they were to pay! For Love STory contest of Silent One

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 11/11/2017 8:43:00 AM
Andrea, I was just catching up on some reading and came across this gem. Wow, nicely done! Congrats! John
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Date: 11/5/2017 1:26:00 PM
A beautiful love story! Congratulations andrea!
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Date: 11/5/2017 12:13:00 PM
Excellent WINNING poem, Andrea! Janice
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Date: 11/5/2017 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea with this beautifully written poem. :))
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Date: 11/5/2017 8:04:00 AM
Beautiful story telling - the passion comes through so well. Congrats on your well deserved win.
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Date: 11/5/2017 6:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your Win Andrea!!! A legendary love indeed. Beautifully told :) Best, Judy
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Date: 11/5/2017 6:47:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
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Date: 11/5/2017 6:38:00 AM
Some legacies live forever, just like this one.. Great story telling Andrea.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
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Date: 9/25/2014 11:05:00 PM
Andrea A wonderfully written tale of this olden day love. The imagery and description bring it to life and entertains the reader. Thank you for the great comment on my My Future poem. Yes, it is fictional.
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Date: 9/23/2014 12:00:00 PM
Excellent poetry. Just exactly what I needed this hot evening. Thanks for the share
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Date: 9/22/2014 5:51:00 PM
I am just reading this one again. I love reading you Andrea, morning, noon, or night.
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Date: 9/17/2014 8:32:00 PM
Forbidden love lives beyond secular law, a passion outlawed not on hot lips Andrea. Your heart really bloomed with passion in this poem, it's romantic! J.A.B.
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Date: 9/15/2014 9:04:00 AM
So much illicit passion in the kingdom. You nailed it here . A love story long remembered. Congratulations.
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:59:00 AM
Awesome write my friend.. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 9/15/2014 8:20:00 AM
a legendary write, Andrea! Congratulations!
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Date: 9/15/2014 7:36:00 AM
Oh I love this story, love this style and absolutely love how beautifully you brought it to life here. Congratulations Andrea on your amazing win.
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Date: 9/15/2014 1:29:00 AM
This reminds me of the olden times, Andrea. congrats
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Date: 9/15/2014 12:01:00 AM
A well deserved win. You captured the spirit of their doomed love so aptly. It was a joy to read. Cheers!
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Date: 9/14/2014 11:42:00 PM
Well crafted but more, touching the spirit of Camelot and reminding me of a long ago visit to 'Tintagel. Congrats on your win
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Date: 9/14/2014 9:54:00 PM
Yeah girl..wonderful win. congrats. BG
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Date: 9/6/2014 9:13:00 AM
Star crossed, eh? Oh yeah, you nailed it. Poor old King Author. Love, daver
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Date: 9/5/2014 5:56:00 PM
Andrea this is a beautiful Love story. I'm having problems with my computer. This is the second comment. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:52:00 PM
A legendary love story beautifully said in this poem with the mixing touch of sweet-sour. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
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Date: 9/5/2014 1:30:00 PM
For a subject I could not hate more...you sure did a nice job tying the flow together. I know you wrote it for a contest, and you put a great deal of effort into the piece , and it definitely shows. Good luck.
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Date: 9/5/2014 9:20:00 AM
This is perfect Andrea, I am a sucker for these kind of romantic tales.
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