A Legendary Love

- “Oh, no! not in spring-time! Summer, winter or fall! No, never could I leave you at all!” From the song “If Ever I Would Leave You” from the movie Camelot https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qqTveSQoKZE A Legendary Love In a special place, Camelot, a legendary love blazed hot - forbidden love that came to naught for Guinevere and Lancelot, King Author’s brightest, boldest knight who sought the love of the king’s bride! Passion could not be denied although Guinevere so tried. One kiss - their love took flight! A spell was cast; now more alive, than ever, they could not deprive themselves of that which made them thrive - that magic for which they would strive to meet in secret, lest they burst! Into each other’s arms they’d fall. Joyously they gave their all, for at passion’s beck and call were two with endless thirst! Her hair of gold; her face so fair. Sir Lancelot could never tear himself away from their affair, and Guinevere, how could she bear to let her soul mate walk away? They lay when leaves or snow would fly; or ‘neath spring or summer sky, proving passion could not die. What price they were to pay! For Love STory contest of Silent One
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Gondolf Avatar
November 11, 2017 at 8:43 AM
Andrea, I was just catching up on some reading and came across this gem. Wow, nicely done! Congrats! John
Rodrigues Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 1:26 PM
A beautiful love story! Congratulations andrea!
Canerdy Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 12:13 PM
Excellent WINNING poem, Andrea! Janice
Pett Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 10:30 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea with this beautifully written poem. :))
Gauthier Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 8:04 AM
Beautiful story telling - the passion comes through so well. Congrats on your well deserved win.
S     Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:52 AM
Congratulations on your Win Andrea!!! A legendary love indeed. Beautifully told :) Best, Judy
Sinha-Roy Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:47 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your win.
One Avatar
November 5, 2017 at 6:38 AM
Some legacies live forever, just like this one.. Great story telling Andrea.. Congratulations on your first place in the contest..
Davis Avatar
September 25, 2014 at 11:05 PM
Andrea A wonderfully written tale of this olden day love. The imagery and description bring it to life and entertains the reader. Thank you for the great comment on my My Future poem. Yes, it is fictional.
Makama Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 12:00 PM
Excellent poetry. Just exactly what I needed this hot evening. Thanks for the share
Yvonne Avatar
September 22, 2014 at 5:51 PM
I am just reading this one again. I love reading you Andrea, morning, noon, or night.
Bordner Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 8:32 PM
Forbidden love lives beyond secular law, a passion outlawed not on hot lips Andrea. Your heart really bloomed with passion in this poem, it's romantic! J.A.B.
Foster Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 9:04 AM
So much illicit passion in the kingdom. You nailed it here . A love story long remembered. Congratulations.
Lindley Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 8:59 AM
Awesome write my friend.. Congrats on your win!
De La Luna Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 8:20 AM
a legendary write, Andrea! Congratulations!
Meier-Hans Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 7:36 AM
Oh I love this story, love this style and absolutely love how beautifully you brought it to life here. Congratulations Andrea on your amazing win.
Mehta Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 1:29 AM
This reminds me of the olden times, Andrea. congrats
Watkins Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 12:01 AM
A well deserved win. You captured the spirit of their doomed love so aptly. It was a joy to read. Cheers!
Rodgers Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 11:42 PM
Well crafted but more, touching the spirit of Camelot and reminding me of a long ago visit to 'Tintagel. Congrats on your win
Gorelick Avatar
September 14, 2014 at 9:54 PM
Yeah girl..wonderful win. congrats. BG
Austin Avatar
September 6, 2014 at 9:13 AM
Star crossed, eh? Oh yeah, you nailed it. Poor old King Author. Love, daver
Carrillo Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 5:56 PM
Andrea this is a beautiful Love story. I'm having problems with my computer. This is the second comment. Good luck in the contest... Lucilla
Devnath  Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 1:52 PM
A legendary love story beautifully said in this poem with the mixing touch of sweet-sour. Good luck in the contest, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
Mister Roboto Avatar
September 5, 2014 at 1:30 PM
For a subject I could not hate more...you sure did a nice job tying the flow together. I know you wrote it for a contest, and you put a great deal of effort into the piece , and it definitely shows. Good luck.
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September 5, 2014 at 9:20 AM
This is perfect Andrea, I am a sucker for these kind of romantic tales.
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