A Leash-Led Life

Down through the thicket,
Over and across the forest bend,
A tail sways, as the wind lifts leaves
of red and yellow.

Aside a pond kissed with moss,
we take a long walk on a clear day,
crawdads and minnows astir.

With hind quarters stiffly creaking forward,
he pants and sniffs at vibrant life
before stopping to rest and regain.

At the edge of the lake, 
he laps the fresh water,
his fur glistening, hot to the touch. 

Back home, he gets a warm bath,
the fragrance of his fur calling to mind memories
of previous days. 

And as he sleeps, that labrador of love
on four legs, I am thankful for the 
leash-led life.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Andresen Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 1:19 PM
- A great poem, Jeffrey :) - Welcome to Poetry - Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)
Flower Avatar
May 14, 2016 at 7:05 AM
That's the way to go! Congrats on your first entry and welcome to Poetry Soup, Jeffrey. :)
Eastman Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 4:35 PM
Welcome to poetrySoup. Enjoyed your piece... I have an old Black Lab... so it was touching to me.
Leiser Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 10:11 AM
I'm so glad you enjoyed this Carol! I still think about our black lab Buddy, he will always be in our hearts.
Dalei Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:30 AM
Jeffrey, Nice and wonderful first entry. Welcome to poetry soup. Hope you will enjoy our community. Wish you a fruitful journey ahead...........//:) hugs
Nance Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 8:12 AM
I love nature and this hike through your scene is beautiful. Nothing like a four legged perspective and the memories of the walk. Well done, I look forward to reading more of your poetry.
Mark Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 1:49 AM
Not bad write, the first two lines grabbed me, with a twinge of excitement...you could have used them again further on, ..to emphasise ? ..don't be afraid of repetition , all in all an ok first poem, but work on the styling, remember less is more in many cases,...ill be back ...Ian
A   Avatar
May 13, 2016 at 12:50 AM
Jeffrey, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
Manassian Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 10:54 PM
This is a lovely write, Jeffery. :) Dogs have such unconditional love for their humans. I'm glad you captured a moment in the life of these sweet creatures. Welcome to the Soup. Your mom is a talented and wonderful person. I guess you already know that though, eh? :)
Leiser Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Yes, she is!
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 7:10 PM
wow, this is a lovely first post at Soup. Awesome one!! WElcome here!
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May 12, 2016 at 3:50 PM
great starter poem welcome to the soup stephen
A  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 1:14 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup, Jeffrey, I see Laura is your mom... It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:00 PM
I just LOVE your poem of our beloved dog, Jeffrey! So happy you have joined the "soup" my son!! :D
Leiser Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 12:05 PM
soup soup soup!! okay, where's the free soup? ; >
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