A Leaf's Journey Downstream

Flowing downstream, over the well washed stones
The water carries the newly fallen leaves
Beautifully corroded in colors of yellow, red, and brown
Belonging to the stream and to the earthen bliss
The remnants of the mighty tree’s glorious statement
Offering its only poignant ways of life’s given theories
Those of the Autumn desires to bring with it deliverance
That of being in reality of one’s own self, versus sending
Pieces of nothing, which the tree never harbors truthfully
In any avenue of the streams desires to wash ashore
The banks of its only pebbles and stones which keep
Some of the leaves as souvenirs, reminders of times
And days which the Earth brought weather gracefully
To its own self metered, sun bathed, water splashed
Equally spaced sounds of a trickle, downwards it flows
And holding a form of what once was a majestic
Plant, stronger than most of the Earthly sages
Lovelier is its descending powers of light emitting colors
Washed with Earth mud, and dirt, and the life giving
Water that supply’s all living things with support
In which to live, Autumn carries much delight in its dance
Of the married leaves, those that grow to become
The great ones, those that make it to full yellow
Or to extreme red, or even to complete orange
These wild leaves, hold a true, non-self-centered degree
Of existence, blending in with all other leaves of gold
Bringing about it a masterpiece of joyous sounds
From the smells of the insect markings, to the raindrops
That leave their own scent, blessing in its own sense
Lifting higher than the wind, when blown skyward
Then laying perfectly on the water, to be moved down
The stream, to find the pile of leaves packed at a log
All dressing up to be their best in appearance for anyone
Who happens to find their way to this happy spot
Where the water meets the log, and the leaves congest
Just like love flowing in the Fall, accepting its target
And resting place to pledge its devotion to its harbor
Where all the leaves of multicolor to congregate and hear
Their words beaming true and feeling their veins please
One another in a blessing of the leaves, on an Autumn day

Autumn Colors Contest
20 September 2017

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 9/20/2017 10:53:00 PM
Exquisite write, my friend, and so emotionally poignant and meaningful ... loved this from start to finish, and had to read again immediately. Superb creation of poetic excellence! :-)
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Date: 9/20/2017 8:17:00 AM
Russell , I can just picture this, exactly. Well written description! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 9/20/2017 7:36:00 AM
This is a wonderfully detailed write, Russell. I almost wanted to save each leaf as it floated downstream, but alas, it's Nature's way of feeding her Earth. The only thing you left out were the babbling noises of the water flowing over the stones. lol I jest. This is a fantastic one to save.
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Date: 9/20/2017 5:58:00 AM
WOW! Russell, you have penned a wonderful scenery and a colorful journey in this masterpiece of a poem. I am amazed how well you wrapped around these long lines to make it a continuous thought that paints autumn--a winner in my books!!
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