A Leaf Unfurls

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as a child of March I love spring its so full of promise
See all of the buds upon the trees
watch closely as slowly one unfurls
each tiny weeny leaf stretching out
one by one peeling away from the buds

Turning their faces up to the sun
some sticky buds much longer taking 
all sorts of shapes and different sizes
as they grow and cast their dappled shade

On the tender plants hiding below
shade lovers of stunning colours
scarlet red Hostas amidst bluebells
the trumpets waving on their long stems

All the sun lovers blooms open wide
drinking in the heat beaming down
tulips bright with merry stripes
all the colours of the rainbow

Swaying gentle in noon heat
tall hollyhocks stately bend
the early promise of a rose
scents abound flooding senses

So easy to lay back and drift off
sun shining down heats the skin
bees droning gathering nectar
such an idyllic place to rest awhile




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Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/20/2015 8:17:00 PM
The last line uses the perfect adjective to describe this lovely scene: idyllic. This was a very good one to end my night on!!!
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Date: 5/22/2015 7:03:00 PM
one of my fav's Andrea I have put it in my book Wistful Thoughts hugs
Date: 6/4/2013 2:04:00 PM
Loved the imagery you portrayed in this write. I love the Spring, it's symetrical beauty amazes me every time. God Bless. Dave. Thanks for reading my stuff.
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Date: 6/4/2013 6:10:00 PM
I love nature Dave pleased you saw it. ty for reading
Date: 5/30/2013 4:44:00 AM
Hi Linda. I really liked this one. The imagery is vivid and I also love how a well crafted description of droning bees jumps out like a simple but brilliant lyric that makes a song. It is Not simple at all but You seem to be one of those writers who makes You think "great line, with I had thought of that"
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Date: 5/30/2013 6:01:00 AM
hi Paul ty so much for your generous comments I like to write about the wonders of nature again ty Linda
Date: 5/25/2013 7:38:00 PM
vivid, and my mind drifted off with the imagery. SKAT
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Date: 5/25/2013 8:07:00 PM
Hi SKAT tnx I try to paint a picture as I write Linda
Date: 5/24/2013 12:08:00 AM
Such pinpointed details in this, that others might brush off as rather insignificant. We live in an amazing world when you really stop to look at things closely...
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Date: 5/24/2013 11:45:00 AM
hi Tim I always try to paint a picture with words because if you can see it in your mind then hopefully you are taken there. much appreciate your comments Linda
Date: 5/21/2013 9:04:00 PM
You have wakened weakening senses with your well crafted post.... Great Job.... Jake
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Date: 5/22/2013 5:54:00 AM
tnx Jake I always think if you can stir someone's imagination you are half way there . I know I get inspired by what I read
Date: 5/20/2013 9:16:00 AM
A very lovely poem Linda, i like the blooming sun... and how wide it spreads vividly. i like the tranquil feeling .... Linda
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