A Lavender In Your Grey

If the mediterranean waves could carry me to your arms I'd wake up to your whisper enchanted by your charms If the wafting wind would breeze me to your bed Our longing lips would kiss in hungry emotions wed If this love I feel could linger in your heart If we could live our dulcet dream and never be apart If I could be with you and you could be with me We'd watch the stars at night sprinkling tranquility twinkling in secret splendour blissing our unknown destiny If we could be together till the day Forever I'd hold on to your hand be your sufficient other a lover and bestfriend I'd be your daily listener your passion,your romance I'd love you to infinity and its universal end If we could lay together on gossamer vast sands and threaded silken sheets made by the mermaid's hands We`d hear the sweetest sounds of shells and corals play I'd call out for your name and hear you answer everyday If I just turn around to find those eyes along the way If I could be with you to live the promise of today Tomorrow I'd still be there a lavender in your grey
A revised old poem of mine
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Smith Avatar
October 16, 2016 at 9:02 AM
So beautiful is this. Thank you for commenting in my Trump and The Beaver poem.
Fraser Avatar
September 30, 2014 at 2:49 PM
Desirably beautiful are the words you scribe Charmaine, as I've said before! You're the Princess become Queen of such poetry, James :)
Lamoureux Avatar
June 14, 2014 at 3:08 PM
It seems the waves keep bringing me back here. I hope you are having a good weekend Charmaine.
Lamoureux Avatar
April 3, 2014 at 9:56 AM
I so enjoyed reading this one again. Please let me know when you post a new one.
O.J. Hunt Avatar
March 16, 2014 at 11:40 AM
Finely crafted sweet-feminine love at its best, angelic and inviting:) Great stuff Charmaine!
Kiser Avatar
February 18, 2014 at 8:18 PM
Beautiful and very passionate.
A   Avatar
January 4, 2014 at 10:05 PM
I agree when my poet friends say you write about beauty, even when your poem is at its deepest moment... Always a Fan Charma... LINDA
Melugin Avatar
December 16, 2013 at 9:16 AM
A 7 Charmaine....I faded to speechless! chuck
Jordan Avatar
November 8, 2013 at 10:28 PM
Gossamer sands & mermaids' hands... What a lovely piece... Jack
Guzzi Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 5:29 PM
Must be Halloween! so much gossamer going around. Very dreamy verse little one light & Love
Onclaud Avatar
October 31, 2013 at 12:13 PM
a sweet hello to lady lavender you, charms... looking forward to your new delight..:) huggs
Virden Avatar
October 30, 2013 at 7:35 PM
Stunning! I had to remind myself to breathe... You are now a favorite. Well done
Carroll Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 12:08 PM
Hi Charmaine, Lovely colorful write as well as romantic.. Ken
Mcdaid Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 10:35 AM
like a diamond it dazzled beauty within beyond words
Ellison Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 10:15 AM
Drake used the word "mesmerized", absolutely perfect description my dear Charmaine!!! But we've come to expect such beauty from your heart! Love and big hugs, Jack xoxox
Jones Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 9:39 AM
Wow.....now that is perfect poetry.....
Onclaud Avatar
October 29, 2013 at 12:31 AM
charms! charms!.. i am in love with this piece; it just sways like a sweet melody... whoot!.:) huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 6:45 PM
I echo the praise of the other poets. This is romance at it's best. I would change the I'll to I'd line 18 up from the bottom.
Chircop Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 6:54 PM
Tnks so much Richard..I fixed it..Tnks for your support and tnks to all my friends below as well : )
Dietrich Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 4:18 PM
what a great revision of your glorious poem, Charma. and thanks for telling me about your sweet dog. Was it Binda you said? That Apollo I wrote of was not really my dog. My friend told me how the sky changed to gold when they made a funeral for Apollo and so I wrote the lines of the poem as if I were my friend!
Tacito Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:30 PM
I am so deeply mesmerized by this. Such powerful longing & want. I can't imagine what inspires your heart to scream into the sky like this writing did. Incredible.
Manassian Avatar
October 28, 2013 at 3:09 PM
ABSOLUTELY DREAMY AND ROMANTIC AND AMAZING AND BEAUTIFUL BEYOND IMAGINATION! WOMAN....YOU SHINE!
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