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A Lass Called Pat Limerick

There once was a lass who waddled. She liked running, but she dawdled. With one terrible roar, She fell hard to the floor. Pat gave up eating Mac Donalds! 11/1/2024 Poem 4

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/3/2024 8:12:00 PM

Pretty good limerick there... I was wondering if Pat also 'threw up,' eating McDonalds? LOL. Horst M. Eat

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/4/2024 9:14:00 PM

Eeuw,,Gershon. That would make for a colorful limerick, especially with an image. Busy now, watching the last rally. I have seen of them.. zowie Superman Miiss Pangie

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 11/2/2024 7:03:00 PM

Great poem. It makes the point, however, it isn't just McDonalds. Most fast food has too much of the bad stuff, fat, oil, salt, additives. I have a hardship to cook my own food. Salt does not agree with me. I look forward to your poem making a difference.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/2/2024 8:01:00 PM

Hi Hilda! Many have various food allergies or physical iillnesses preventing them from eating certain foods. I sold nutritional products for years and during those years learned much from scientists and doctors, amazes me that we use electronic magnetic devices every day with impunity ,not knowing the damage to our bodies, mind and spirits. People live in denial Hilda! cell towers are extremely damaging, but we’re around them all the time. And we spend hours in front of a PC with no idea.the harm they cause. Best to eat at home) LOL)) Elena makes mine. I really did not mean the poem to send a message. Just Mickey D’s rhymed !)) Pangie

John Read

Date: 11/2/2024 1:46:00 AM

Pat yelled at the top of her voice, that Mac Donalds wasn't her choice, a quick takeaway, had ruined her day, this wasn't a time to rejoice.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/2/2024 8:53:00 AM

Hurrah John. I love your limerick. You and Beryl sdo it with ease…Pangie ))

Beryl Edmonds

Date: 11/2/2024 1:12:00 AM

Now Pat has become a first class sprinter - She runs every day from spring to winter - Is fit as a fiddle - Has lost her big middle - And has changed her name to Olympia…… Beryl

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/2/2024 8:50:00 AM

Awesome , hilarious, bravo for the fine limerick, pangie,

thriveni c mysore

Date: 11/1/2024 8:35:00 PM

Nice write dear poet. Limerick is indeed a difficult form, you make it seem effortless.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/1/2024 8:57:00 PM

Greetings thriveni. How nice of you to say so. It wasnt that effortlesx for me. I hope it gets easier as I go along. Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 11/1/2024 6:44:00 PM

Pangie, I love great lims and this is a great one - Bob H

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/1/2024 7:10:00 PM

Ues, yes you do love lims!! You are a master at these, No kidding! Honored by your words. Pangie

Elena Eagle

Date: 11/1/2024 5:34:00 PM

This made me laugh. Very witty and well done.

Panagiota Romios
Date: 11/1/2024 7:07:00 PM

Oh, hi Elena! So glad you liked this. It is not a form I am comfortable with just yet. I hope the limericks in the future, will grow exponentially. Pangie