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A Labour of Love Recited

What intimacy is its cause,perhaps an immaculate conception of words; too swift to comprehend,see or recognise.The moment is there and then is not.Gone with the wind the seed of idea remains, to germinate and gestate,fanned by a mental fragrance of elation.Slowly self-transcending a word into a phrase, a sentence to a strophe;a rhyme rides a waterfall of cadence, into a chasm of verse. Terse or long, the sonnet becomes a little song, struggles to arrive.Thrust forth upon my page;a bastard-born of pain, ancestry unknown,no more to roam Hear me read this poem aloud here http://youtu.be/GiD8JdYi-jw and my other video poetry at this link http://youtube.com/ichthyschiro

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 4/24/2013 6:34:00 AM
Congrats on your win¬A.O
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Date: 4/24/2013 4:38:00 AM
Replied in soupmail, Brian.... thanks!
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Date: 4/23/2013 11:45:00 AM
Super congrats, Brian! I really enjoyed hearing your voice, and your poem is really wonderful, and I agree on how writing can be such a labor of love! It is an honor to place with you :) --nikko :)
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Date: 4/23/2013 12:20:00 AM
Brian, I loved your poem and accent! I knew it was there....but it's great to finally hear it. RAY
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Date: 4/22/2013 6:43:00 PM
I am so pleased to see this at the top....and honored to be next to yours......since you were the inspiration for me to try this new venue. I am so grateful ...thank you for all the encouragement!
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Date: 4/22/2013 6:30:00 PM
Brian, :-) congratulations with your awesome Recited Poem.... Always~ PD
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Date: 4/22/2013 4:40:00 PM
Congratulations, Brian! I like your simple approach, voice with just the words. Please comment on my latest blog if you can to share your experience.
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Date: 2/1/2013 8:30:00 PM
Excellent write Brian!!I can relate!!With every line my heart sang with JOY of the toiled Labour. A seed in flight!!!....and a beautiful bouquet has sprouted!!!Thankx for the inspiration!!~God bless!!!Rick
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