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A Kiss Under the Mistletoe

A single beauty stood under a Mistletoe Hung Outside the temple of the goddess of love Waiting for the blessing of goddess Frigg And expecting to bond with the man she loved. A young man rushed under the Mistletoe tree Looked with a question mark, an exclamation Followed by a kiss on the forehead, then cheeks On lips then comma after kiss with passion. Both felt something melting that hurt in a way The dreams, longings, sleeping deep got awakened With a long kiss, he plucked berries till the last They got out of the tree enchanted, freshened.center> +++++ Date 30-11-13 First Place Win Rhonda's Contest

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/26/2014 9:44:00 PM

DR RAM, CONGRATULATIONS on having a top win in the kissing Mistletoe contest... Love LINDA

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/19/2014 8:38:00 AM

Congratulations Dr Ram, it's been so long since I've been here, I'm feeling guilty xx

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 12/17/2014 6:14:00 PM

Nice to hear about your culture..and a mistletoe tree. congrats. BG

Gary Watkins

Date: 12/17/2014 1:10:00 PM

Very nice imagery. I think you really captured the moment here. Congratulations on your well deserved win.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/16/2014 4:53:00 PM

beautifully penned Dr Mehta many congrats:-) Hugs jan xx

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 12/16/2014 2:25:00 PM

congratulations Dr. M on your win, well done

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/16/2014 2:12:00 PM

Congrats on this great win Dr.,...huggs

Pam Woolford

Date: 12/8/2013 10:50:00 PM

Kissing under the mistletoe is such a romantic gesture. You can never tell what will follow. Lovely poem Dr.Ram Pam

Vee Bdosa

Date: 12/5/2013 7:53:00 AM

Hello, Doctor, first let me thank you for the comments. Now down to the Mistletoe, LOL I was 8, and something of a more sexually minded kid than I should have been, but at a 4-H Club Christmas party there was mistletoe hung over a doorway, and who would suspect an 8 year old boy of this?Well, there was a 23 year old girl I really had a crush on, and I stood in the doorway and waved for her to come over, I had to reach up quite a bit, but I flat planted a grown up kiss on her.She lovd it.

Robin Davis

Date: 12/2/2013 9:09:00 PM

Dr. Ram A nicely written piece of romance and love. It's strange what a little piece of mistletoe can make us do and feel. Nice job Thanks for the great comment on my Wasted Life poem

Gary Fields

Date: 12/1/2013 5:23:00 PM

Nice write>up! I have to remember to do just this, this holiday! your friend in the pen/G.FIELDS

Joseph May

Date: 12/1/2013 11:04:00 AM

nicely penned Dr Ram...best wishes

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 12/1/2013 9:31:00 AM

really beautifully crafted romantic piece

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 12/1/2013 8:46:00 AM

a lovely twist here Ram very much enjoyed it Shadow x smile hug

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 12/1/2013 7:23:00 AM

How sweet the tradition of the mistletoe is amd how beautifully penned is this tale.Very romantic indeed.Tnks for stopping by my verse.

Monterey Sirak

Date: 12/1/2013 7:23:00 AM

Romance, and beauty abound here. Wonderful poem

Jacob Cra

Date: 11/30/2013 1:35:00 PM

Lovely. This is phenomenal work. Nevertheless, I do like to give helpful advice whenever possible. Personally, I think you should change the last line of the 2nd stanza.. it doesn't really flow. Nevertheless, nice work!

Ndaba Sibanda

Date: 11/30/2013 8:50:00 AM

l enjoyed reading this poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/30/2013 8:22:00 AM

- Romantic ..... lovely poem Dr. Ram - Good luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/30/2013 7:19:00 AM

This is a very wondrous write my friend! I truly loved reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a brilliant piece, such a glorious poem, Great Work!!