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Edward Ibeh's This or That, Vol 29 Contest... Written 23 Dec 24

A Kiss In The Dark

POTD How I wish I could have clutched vignettes of remembrance on this bench in a park; the same wooden one which cradled our afternoons, feeding little birds as slices of pang gripped my marrow-- The sharp sting of her farewell, right on this spot drowned time's kohl of fate--- that now, I hold the seat's arms limply, if only to recall how we kissed in the dark exploring east, west of mouths-- my fingers messing her hair nipping quick hours of rendezvous. I forget not the windswept look of her distant eyes... hours I have delayed with my misgivings, my absence wretchedly crossed --- and upon my woman's leaving I on this park every sordid night kiss her only in my thoughts ---forgive.
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Rose  Avatar
December 31, 2024 at 4:15 AM
This is perfect, and I rarely say so Nette, :) congrats
Ibeh Avatar
December 29, 2024 at 12:15 PM
Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest with this outstanding poem, Nette. I absolutely loved the sensuousness and the striking imagery. A well-deserved POTD win. Wishing you a Happy New Year!
Alex Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 8:46 PM
"I on this park every sordid night kiss her only in my thoughts" - Nostalgia. Poignance. Passion. Love... Loss. ... Very powerful poem. Congratulations!
Rone Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:26 PM
Dear Nette: The emotion and angst drew me, so vividly expressed. I remembered verses of thr Smith/Springsteen "Because the Night ". Best -Ken
Nicole Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 5:28 PM
' I forget not the windswept look of her distant eyes, every sordid night, kiss her only in my thoughts. ' Moments and memories seem to tug upon the heartstrings. This is beautiful, sensual, and emotional; all at the same time. Congratulations Nette, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. Hugs, Brandy
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December 24, 2024 at 4:54 PM
Very romantic, passionate poetry Nette. Congratulations on receiving the honour of poem of the day… Beryl
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 2:55 PM
Congratulations on your heart-wrenching, nostalgic poem to being chosen as POTD. With sensual images and enchanting choice of words, you have portrayed a scene remembering passionate romantic love!
Ramel Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 1:33 PM
Congrats on POTD......love the weaving of words.....I feel like I am sitting on that park bench
Wolf Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 1:02 PM
Windswept, I wept -- haunting! Congrats on POTD, Nette. Season's best, Gershon
May Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Memories of a lost love, Congrats on POTD
Anaya Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 11:12 AM
Nette, so nice to see such a passionate poem honored on this day. Mesmerizing thoughts of a distant lover with distant eyes, cry out and have taken her far from the day's celebration. Forgiveness is for you. xo Congratulations on POTD!! May you have Happy Holidays
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December 24, 2024 at 10:31 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Nette! This poem is so winsome, your words speaking a plaintive longing for a lost love. So happy to see this as the POTD! Sending you all the blessings of Christmas! Merry Christmas to you and all of your loved ones!
Parker Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 10:06 AM
Excellent POTD choice, Nette!! Very well crafted and worthy selection. Merry Xmas! :o))
Rodgers Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 9:05 AM
Dear Nette, What a wonderful romantic, sensual and loss poem!! No Wonder it is POTD and certainly should be. Merry Christmas, My Dear Friend, Daniel
Meadows Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations on your POTD. Well done.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 6:33 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write. Have a Merry/Blessed Christmas and a Happy/Blessed New Year 2025.....................
Read Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 5:11 AM
Congratulations on your POTD Nette wishing you a happy Christmas and a healthy new year God bless.
Gifford Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 3:11 AM
A wonderfully written POTD, Nette. Congratulations on your win and Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year to you.
Elliott Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 2:55 AM
Beautiful POTD, Nette. Congratulations, enjoy your special poetry day!
Cunningham Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 1:54 AM
Quite a romantic verse Nette, congratulations to you on the honour of POTD. Tom
Williams Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 1:43 AM
Passionate, sensual and nostalgic remembrance Nette all woven into a lovely poem. Congrats on your POTD - hugs Maria
Jones Avatar
December 24, 2024 at 12:32 AM
A passionate potd! Congratulations!
Parker Avatar
December 23, 2024 at 4:31 PM
I think you still clutch the vignettes of remembrance in the memory of a windswept look of her distant eyes... what a glorious still photograph you have painted, dear poet
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December 23, 2024 at 2:29 PM
Nette, a fascinating poem about memory. There seems to be some remorse still, and that will take a lot of work on the part of the character to resolve, although I sense that is happening...at least I hope so for the character's sake. There are so many of us that can't get past something like this. This kind of hurt affects our present existence and I get it completely. It's so hard to move on when love is involved. Probably harder than anything else. The hurt can last a long time. Smiles!
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December 22, 2024 at 5:35 PM
A fav for me! This is absolutely breathtaking, Nette...
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