A Kiss

When lips collide
as they are want to do
the tender crush
distills all to a moment revealing
what makes a man believe in heaven
is contained in her eyes
and released in her kiss

loveromancefree verse

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Vince Suzadail Jr.

April 3, 2012 at 7:53 AM

Descriptive write. Thanks for the comments.

Laura Breidenthal

April 1, 2012 at 1:19 PM

Marvelous description. :) Much liked this verse Always, Laura

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 27, 2012 at 12:35 PM

Thank you for your kind words on my poetry. It is always a pleasure to read your writings Chuck. Love, Carol

Shirley Long

February 26, 2012 at 10:36 AM

Chuck this is a wonderful love poem about A Kiss! I enjoyed reading it and loved the verses what makes a man believe in heaven is contained in her eyes.

Poet Destroyer A

February 26, 2012 at 6:58 AM

Chuck a big congratulations on your poem featured this week...have a Nice andsweet beautiful Sunday like your cute poem here......pd

Taylor Thompson

February 21, 2012 at 1:14 PM

Oh so sweet :) Thanks for sharing

Chuck Novotny

February 21, 2012 at 11:11 PM

Thank you Taylor. I've enjoyed some of your work also. Keep writing, too. - Chuck

Carol Sunshine Brown

February 21, 2012 at 11:45 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Chuck. Love, Carol

Chuck Novotny

February 21, 2012 at 11:10 PM

Thank you Carol. I am learning a lot from reading your work. It is helping to refine my word choices, and become more economical with them. - Chuck

Samual Ronthorpe

February 19, 2012 at 10:10 PM

Chuck, this is a beautiful write. I really enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing and congrats on having your work featured by Poetry Soup this week................S.Ronthorpe

Chuck Novotny

February 21, 2012 at 11:09 PM

Your comment was the first notice I got about being featured. Thank you for the compliments. - Chuck

Cindy Lu

February 18, 2012 at 8:19 AM

says much in short form. Nice writing. Sincerely, Cindy Lu

Chuck Novotny

February 18, 2012 at 11:41 AM

Thank you. I appreciate your taking time to read and comment. - Chuck

Andrea Dietrich

February 11, 2012 at 12:45 AM

wowie!!! this is really nice, Chuck. I don't think I have seen you here before at soup. thanks for your comment on my most recent post. You need to start entering some of these contests. Like the dodoitsu one on trees. I can see that you are already skilled and this one you did here could easily be transformed into tanka. (those are always popular with contests here) Goodnight now. Andrea

Chuck Novotny

February 11, 2012 at 12:56 AM

Thank you. I'm still learning poetry. Words are less a problem. The various forms I hope to be abe to explore in the coming days and weeks and life!

Carol Sunshine Brown

January 31, 2012 at 8:11 AM

It is exciting to see the replenishment of new poetry here everyday when I log on. I enjoy the diverse poetry so I am never bored by most of what I read. I am happy to have read your poetry this morning Chuck. I hope that you might be able to find the time to read some of the other poetry here also. Love, Carol