A King's Ransom We'd Spent

     Went to school, got good grades
         a decent lawyer, I made

     Met a girl, saved some dough 
        She was my bride, I her beaux

     Three little girls nearly broke the bank
        retirement loomed 
                 Was anything left in the tank

     A king’s ransom we’d spent
         What had it all meant

    The forced smiles, the countless deceptions
         ~ Was any of it worth a single damn cent
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Date: 8/5/2025 3:34:00 PM
As I read your words I reflected upon the raising of my stepchildren. We definitely spent a king's ransom both in money and time. Everything seemed forced at the time...like you I ponder, was any of it worth it in the end. Sigh
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Date: 8/5/2025 4:40:00 AM
Such honest reflection, Gershon—this hits deep. The rhyme adds a light rhythm, but the questions linger heavy. A powerful, poignant piece on the cost of life’s choices.
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Date: 8/5/2025 12:37:00 AM
I sure am it was BB when you look at your girls and your grandkids and see who they have become and the joy they bring you! Children cost a lot that is for sure but we find the $$ and do the best we can…..then grow old and die haha!! Great poem!! Debx
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Date: 8/4/2025 10:20:00 PM
Well I love it! Always did enjoy your work Gershon !:)
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Date: 8/4/2025 9:39:00 PM
Meaningful poetry, Gershon. I have one son and 2 daughters ... 3 of each counting the stepsons and stepdaughters. It is enlightening to look back on the facade of who we've been to earn them dollars. Have a pleasant week, my friend. Bill
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Date: 8/4/2025 8:42:00 PM
Three girls -wow! That does seem like there might be some expenses involved.
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