A June Reflection

It’s Saturday and I’m lying on the grass on a hot June afternoon. I hear no sounds except for those of nature. Most folks, I surmise, are tucked away in their air-conditioned homes (if not out shopping or enjoying some family recreation), for I see nobody else in sight. Alone in the bliss of peacefulness, I look upward.

cauliflower clouds -
their sprawling backdrop . . .
crayola blue

As I watch the clouds slowly drift and meld into one another, I recall as a child lying by my mother as she pointed out to me and my sisters the clouds and how they appeared to be changing into wooly animals! To think I once had time to just lie back on green grass that way, watching cloud formations with family! How long ago it all seems! Absorbing nature now, I am a child again, and I watch as a butterly drifts by. On the fence, a dragonfly now takes residence, and I am mellow like sun and wind.

summer’s hum. . .
a ladybug
hugs my arm
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Kendrick Avatar
March 23, 2026 at 5:30 AM
Back with congratulations on your winning work in Brian's contest. Way to go. Definitely a creative way to go. Sara K
Godwin Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 10:47 AM
I scrolled down and noticed that the 2018 version of me did read this and truly liked it. She's so sweet and sincere and capable, miss her.
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 12:29 PM
Yes you had read it. I may have entered it for the marathon. If not then, I will next time. I picked one for the short form contest but I have little hope for it winning
Godwin Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 10:44 AM
I've never read this, it seems future Mark Marathon's worthy. I love the nostalgia and recall that he does, too. High five, Drea! To you and mea. Going to go check out what he wants now.
Brul Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 6:20 AM
What a heart warming story! I love this! congratulations! A huge FAVE!!^___^ PS: Soupmail
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2026 at 12:32 PM
Thanks so much!
Gauthier Avatar
August 13, 2018 at 6:15 AM
Beautiful, Andrea. I so admire those who 'find' the time for the important things in life. Congrats on your win.
Kendrick Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 5:21 PM
Ahh!! Great descriptive work. Brings back memories of childhood but even as a child I did not enjoy the heat of summer. I remember how hot it would be lying on the grass watching the clouds. I still enjoy looking at them inside an air conditioned car or truck riding along the road or just parked with the AC on. Congrats on your placement in the contest. Sara
Mandani Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 11:53 AM
Very nice.
Talbot Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:14 AM
Last but first, your win, for from the bottom my contestants' comments I did begin. All thirty-four read at my leisure, the closer to the end the greater the pleasure. And hey I cast no aspersions all were good but some were better, Yours Andrea topped them all, thank you for the privilege of reading, my congratulations you are now receiving, Mick
Fisher Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:48 PM
Congrats! Well deserved! A great memory watching the changing shapes of clouds.
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:15 PM
Great imagery, Andrea! Congratulations on your win...Charlie
Roper Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 9:22 PM
Back with Big Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Gentry Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 2:51 PM
Congratulations on your #1 win. Enjoyed reading this beautiful haibun. Your imagery of nature is calming to read. Well done!
La France Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 1:31 PM
Andrea, congratulations on first place in Mick's contest, with this beautifully penned Haibun, well done !
Pett Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 7:11 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win Andrea, this was a pleasure to read so well written. :))
Waters Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:22 PM
so good to hear you still do this - childhood magic is only lost if we let it be lost. always sad to see humans down-faced watching electronics when the sky blazes mysteries above. Congrats of course
Rodrigues Avatar
July 5, 2018 at 4:11 PM
Very nice images, Andrea! Enjoyed! Congrats on first place!
Michael Avatar
July 3, 2018 at 11:00 PM
You seem to be drifting down memory lane...
Delaney Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 3:56 PM
Lovely to connect with nature by just being there and getting lost in the sounds and movement. The sudden awareness of the lady bug broke the reverie in a perfect finale. Good Luck in the Contest. SuZ
Godwin Avatar
July 2, 2018 at 7:03 AM
A soothing feel is delivered in the nostalgic thoughts that drift gentle as the clouds in your write. I related, grew bittersweet responses for those innocent memories of giving myself to sky watching, but in the end I giggled with innocent glee to have a ladybug's hug. Such a joy to spend time inside this write. Love to you ... CayCay
Horsman Avatar
July 1, 2018 at 6:26 AM
I just had to read this Andrea, and not disappointed either..i love the clouds also, Islands floating in a deep blue see, your haibun, touches me, it is beautiful.
Marcum Wong Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 10:54 PM
A beautiful haibun that shares the calm of nature and how it restores the energy centers of the body Andrea. I enjoyed this very much. When I first began to read I pictured a ladybug in my mind and smiled when I got to your ending. : ) xxoo
Anish Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 12:55 PM
Dear Andrea This is a beautiful piece. I was inspired today and wrote a short story this morning. I hope you remember me in your prayers as I have been so ill that it was almost the end for me. I was supposed to teach ESL this summer but was not able to. Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Pandit Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 5:57 AM
Enjoyed reading this reflective poem..wonderful recall of pleasant memories..peaceful and serene..well done, Andrea.
Kannan Avatar
June 30, 2018 at 3:58 AM
WOW... Amazing Haibun, Andrea. A blissful environment.Enjoyed it... Thanks for sharing this peaceful poetry. Such a pleasure to read.
Roper Avatar
June 29, 2018 at 10:48 PM
Beautiful, Andrea :)
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