Besma Riabi Dziri Poet Free verse

A Journey of Rarity

How I long to see me
on a walk of possibilities
a journey of rarity
a world of no worries
wide opening the gates of boundaries
the mind lines crossing
the heart chambers stretching..

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Set on the branch of my heart
rest with your Love
feel home and feed soul
My senses I would close
My mind I would set loose
A sweet surrender
the Self wings carefree..

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How I long to dream of me
detached as I could be
One and only me!
sweet and true be!
No sound
dares a quiet mind
or mutes a heart’s glee..

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Bill Baker November 20, 2023 at 5:43 PM A blessed journey that will be, Besma. For God said, "be still and know that I am God." Happy Thankgiving! A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Robertina B. April 27, 2021 at 6:00 PM Your talent indeed shines so beautifully, dear Besma. .. Absolutely enjoyed your splendid write! So uplifting and profound.. Aloneness can be so fulfilling and heartfelt! Many blessings to you, my friend.. This is going into my faves! Besma Riabi Dziri May 6, 2021 at 5:32 AM My delight is great as I read amazing feedbacks on my humble words! My pleasure is immense to read your wonderful feedback dear Robertina! Thank you so much for your beauty and generosity! Deeply humbled and honoured.. My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Jennifer Proxenos April 27, 2021 at 10:19 AM You are so right Besma, it is the unattainable that encourages us to surge forward. You need to surrender such a kind, blessed, unique soul and heart to the winds and wings of heaven. Love, love, love your poetry, set your heart free, it is so gentle a heart and one that inspires me and I'm sure many on soup, be safe my dearest friend Besma, Hugs and love, Jennifer. Besma Riabi Dziri May 6, 2021 at 4:23 AM Dearest friend Jenny, how l am deeply humbled by your great words of appreciation and praise! How blessed to have so sweet a soul sister reading and wonderfully commenting on my poetry! I can't thank you enough for the amount of beauty and happiness you bring to my soul! Thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Aurore Severo April 18, 2021 at 12:54 AM :) sometimes a short comment is the best of all Besma Riabi Dziri May 6, 2021 at 4:19 AM My pleasure sweet poetess ! Thank you so much for the honour of your visit! My deepest regards and blessings.

Sotto Poet April 15, 2021 at 4:06 PM Loneliness is actually a wonderful thing when we need to relax and to tell his sorrows and agony or just to feel the limitless of our very tiny word, your words go straight to the heart. With my best regards to you. Besma Riabi Dziri April 16, 2021 at 4:24 PM Your profound feedback delighted my very soul.. and so glad I am to know that my humble words touched your poetic soul.. deeply humbled.. thank you once again for your support, Lasaad! My deepest regards and blessings.

Victor Buhagiar April 13, 2021 at 2:23 PM This is a lyrical wish for an utopia that I'm afraid is unattainable in this world. Perhaps in the next. But of that I am sure. Besma Riabi Dziri April 16, 2021 at 3:53 PM What is unattainable is what really sustains us to appreciate and look up to life! Always a great pleasure to read your insightful and encouraging feedbacks.. thank you so much, Victor! My warmest wishes and best regards.

Mystic Rose Rose April 13, 2021 at 9:08 AM on the branch of my heart rests Love, for great poets such as you, Have a blessed day, bloom where you are planted dear friend. xo Besma Riabi Dziri April 16, 2021 at 3:43 PM I sincerely appreciate your kind response regarding my humble poetry! How generous of you, dear Rose to brighten my soul with your warm and beautiful sentiments.. thank you so much! My warmest wishes. Love and hugs.

Vijay Pandit April 13, 2021 at 6:43 AM This is so beautiful Besma--your poem has the beat of a song and it is wishful like dreams. Much enjoyed the longing for sweet surrender and heart in glee. I am saving this amazing write in my FAVES. Besma Riabi Dziri April 16, 2021 at 3:38 PM I'm so happy you have enjoyed my humble thoughts and feelings, and I'm so pleased to know that it's worthy of being cherished as a fave.. Deeply humbled and grateful for your great support dear Vijay.. My warmest wishes. Best regards and blessings.