A Journey Into the Mind

So here I am on the beginning of my journey
A man invited into the woman’s mind
An unusual experiment I must admit
But one that might save all of mankind.

So where am I now, nothing looks familiar here
There are emotions I cannot understand!
I am sensing things I never sensed before
God, it’s much easier being a man.

Why is she not thinking about sex all the time?
What is this need for nurturing things?
And why is it that once each month
A feeling of bloating and instability it brings?

Oh, now that feeling is nice, what could that be?
Wow, a deeper sense of selflessness love.
Now that is indeed something man does need,
I’ll have to have a talk with the guy from up above.

Okay it looks like my time is up
This experiment has come to an end
They are making me exit the woman’s mind,
I sure hope they let me come back again.



Entry in The Opposite Sex contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 4/1/2012 9:14:00 AM
Excellent write...I for one would like to see you enter a woman's mind once again : )
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Date: 5/9/2010 6:34:00 AM
Wonderful poem Joe, many congratulations on your win in Nathan's contest >> James
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Date: 5/8/2010 6:15:00 PM
Awesome write, Joe. Really enjoyed it :)
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Date: 5/8/2010 4:09:00 PM
Congrats Joe on your HM in Nathan's contest.. wonderful honor for a wonderful write.. luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/28/2010 10:24:00 PM
hi there Joe :) You sure took some great notes during your visit ;) would sure be interesting what other things you'll find out in your next trip in a woman's mind--keep us posted! Wish you the best in the contest :)
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Date: 4/28/2010 7:55:00 PM
Good job Joe. You got women's feelings pretty good.Should be a winner. Thank you for your comments on my Vacation poem.
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Date: 4/28/2010 6:45:00 PM
Good luck in the contest
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Date: 4/28/2010 3:15:00 PM
very nice good luck in the contest and thank you for your kind comments faleshia
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Date: 4/28/2010 2:12:00 PM
good luck, nice,..p.d.
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