A Jackson

The pearl-gray sky of early morning
harmonized with my mood;
color without color
life without meaning;
as I wandered through the streets
at a loss; no job.

My downcast eyes;
eye contact unsought;
watching my feet step by drudging step,
came across a twenty-dollar bill,
discarded, dropped, abandoned?
It lay there, slightly grubby;
as money often is.

To lose a twenty bill, I thought
for someone could be the difference;
food or hunger,
others; just a gamble;
on some bright spinning reels of chance.
But here it was:
Twenty dollars on the ground,
Andrew, staring at me; tempting.

A moments troubled hesitation;
I move on
and leave the twenty where it lay
for someone needier than I to find.

Yellow sunshine pierces the gray
My back straightens
my walk is brisker, zippy.


$ Poetry Contest placed 1st
Sponsored by: Anthony Biaanco
Date wrote: 13-June-2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021



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Date: 7/2/2021 1:09:00 AM
I do hope that your selfless act to enrich the unknown recipient, found a deserving mark. I enjoyed this read. Congratulations on your win.
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2021 4:19:00 AM
I hope so too, thank you for your kind words.
Date: 6/24/2021 10:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Many times one will find coins on the ground but bills are harder to find. Love your line, "for someone needier than I to find." Enjoy your win with blessings................
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Terry Miller
Date: 7/2/2021 4:18:00 AM
Thank you Paula for your kind comments.
Date: 6/22/2021 12:14:00 AM
congrats on your win! very nice moral!!
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/23/2021 7:54:00 AM
Thank you for reading and your kind comment.
Date: 6/19/2021 3:19:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/19/2021 4:51:00 AM
Thank you so much.
Date: 6/19/2021 2:50:00 AM
Congratulations! This is a Beautiful Poem.
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/19/2021 4:51:00 AM
Thank you for your kind words.
Date: 6/13/2021 3:11:00 AM
nicely penned ///Leave all for the needy if not necessary for you!
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Terry Miller
Date: 6/19/2021 12:47:00 AM
Indeed, thank you for your kind comment.
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