A Is For Abolish

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A is for abolish housework forever Make it illegal to clean everything Graduating college engineers clever Do your part, design houses where clean clings Maybe a strong wind tunnel designed right Could blow the dust out once or twice each week While owners go out dancing for a night Or a shredder next to a chute when bills pique Engineers design concrete houses sleek With built in water cleaning system fine Compartments styled water proof with mystique Each to house valuables closely enshrined Let's abolish housework, freedom we all need Unrestrained abandoned to write poetry plead Written: Thursday, March 31, 2016 Inspired by contest: The Alphabet Contest/ Letter A

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Mahtab Bangalee

Date: 9/16/2019 5:16:00 AM

A for Abolish! and Let's abolish housework, freedom we all need...// beautiful poem shared; I enjoyed

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/19/2019 12:23:00 PM

Thanks for the visit to my page. I appreciate all the visits. Sara

Ryan Lucas

Date: 9/15/2019 6:11:00 PM

You have a creative mind and a lovely sense of humor, Sara. This is brilliant!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/16/2019 4:30:00 AM

Ryan, Thanks for the compliments. I appreciate your candid response. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/2/2016 9:09:00 PM

You do have a sense of humor, Sara. "Make it illegal to clean everything" ... probably not a necessary law in my room ... I would never break it. LOL! I do love your last line, Sara. Would be a dream. Glad you liked my Love Without Hope poem, and had it place :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 9/25/2019 4:53:00 PM

Timothy, Thanks for dropping by. I appreciate the time spent here. Sara

J.W. Earnings

Date: 4/1/2016 12:00:00 PM

Amazing poem. How I can relate to this verse. It's wonderful how you explained it so articulately and genuinely. I do housework around the place and the dust bit I can empathize on 100%. You did a fantastic job, writing this. Keep up the writing! - J W Earnings ~~~~~~~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/1/2016 1:26:00 AM

wow, Sara. I LOVE this. I didn't know you felt the same way about cleaning as I did. Too bad this contest will likely never get judged. I cannot see hide or hair of Freddie around.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/1/2016 6:09:00 AM

Well, I enjoyed writing it whether it gets judged or not..I did notice that there was no sponsor's name on the contest..Right now I am more worried about the cut where Bull bit me yesterday. Sara