A Hundred Words

You imagined - you would travel the world... with me, but didn't say a word, how would I know what your thoughts were, unless you opened your heart? or may be I should have known, looking into your eyes, how can you love more not saying a hundred words? so sorry, I should have known... words can not express every feeling. gaze in the blue ocean of sight, eyes will tell you everything!

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/17/2020 3:47:00 PM

Hello Mala, this poem had brought tears into my eyes. so sad. love Darlene. enjoy your evening .

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/18/2020 10:26:00 AM

Hello Mala, yes some people are too quiet to express themselves.Enjoy your day my frind.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2020 4:47:00 PM

Darlene, you are right. Some people are too quiet to express their feelings ... that may bring a lot of sadness. Enjoy your evening, my friend.

Silent One

Date: 10/17/2020 11:46:00 AM

Oh this is terribly sad... Seems like bad communication ...

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 10/17/2020 12:29:00 PM

Yes, you are right - lack of communication causes terrible things in life! Thanks for reading.