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A Hula-Hula Skirt

Sarina bought a hula-hula skirt
Was so long it swept up the garden dirt 
When she mowed the lawn
Her hula was shorn 
Now poor Sarina is known as Flirt Girt.

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/8/2024 10:14:00 PM

Whoa!! That short!! Good one. Sara K

Christina Bowring

Date: 1/30/2024 7:36:00 AM

This is so good dear Beryl. A brilliant limerick that made me laugh. I’m still chuckling now! Thank you for the joy of reading this one. :):)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/30/2024 2:34:00 PM

Thank you Christina, I’m so pleased this Limerick gave you a laugh. Blessings, Beryl :) :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/29/2024 3:38:00 AM

Loved it, my friend. Great laugh.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/29/2024 6:46:00 AM

Glad that you liked this my friend, and that it gave you a laugh. Beryl

Silent One

Date: 1/28/2024 12:17:00 PM

Ha! Good one Beryl...

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/29/2024 2:48:00 AM

Thanks, Silent One. Beryl

David Fisher

Date: 1/28/2024 11:59:00 AM

Funny limerick that paints an interesting picture, indeed!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/29/2024 2:47:00 AM

Thank you David. Beryl

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 1/28/2024 2:42:00 AM

You set out to work and mow the lawn but you ended up with a shorn skirt, which showed a leg probably all two, which made you known to be a flirt . Great fun Limerick my friend, Hugs and blessings, Jennifer,

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/28/2024 3:47:00 AM

Hi Jennifer, never wear a long skirt when mowing the lawn, one might get it shorn and expose what is or isn’t worn. Hugs and blessings in return dear friend. Beryl

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 1/27/2024 8:07:00 PM

A humorous limerick, Beryl. Well done.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/27/2024 8:34:00 PM

Thank you so much Jerry, pleased you enjoyed the read. Beryl

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/27/2024 8:01:00 PM

Awwwn oh my, this gave me a huge smile, so hilarious! Love your descriptions here within few words dear Belle, a really unique and fun limerick poem that instantly brings laughter and joy.. I absolutely adored reading this .. Sending many best wishes and light to you~ have a beautiful Sunday!

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 1/27/2024 8:33:00 PM

Thank you dearest Hiya, I’m thrilled to read this Limerick gave you a huge smile. Best wishes and light to you too, and a delightful Sunday also. Belle