Johnny Sumler Poet Dizain

A Hue of Heaven

Above lime trees, below the lemon sun
The bees and birds bathe in the skies lagoon
Of this fine hour I gaze what has begun
To me to be the quiet birth of noon
In symphony with natures harp and tune

A hue of heaven brushed above the air
Of sacred ether and omniscient flare
Baptising wings where-in horizons dew
With eyes as feet that step to stair, I stare
Awestruck anew a splendour of a view

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Elizabeth Wesley October 31, 2011 at 10:24 PM You make everything so special, a flare with words that gives the reader all they need. Love the descriptions "lemon sun" "baptising wings" delicious descriptions. Luv, Eliz

Charlotte Puddifoot September 5, 2011 at 4:06 PM this is a beautiful rendition of quite a challenging form, love the 'lime trees' and the 'lemon sun'...thanks for your kind comments on my work, I think we've met on here before, I seem to remember exchanging comments :-)

Andrea Dietrich September 4, 2011 at 10:06 PM Johnny, these dizain are quite like sonnets, aren't they? This is so pretty and sonnet like. I think I will just look over all my old sonnets and find some lines to use in a dizain!! Hey, thanks for your sweet comments the other day. I want to comment back to everyone I missed yesterday. Couldn't do Soup at all. Wish I had more time! Luv, Andrea

Elizabeth Wesley September 4, 2011 at 7:32 PM Can I be there with you? It sounds so lovely!

Susan Palli September 4, 2011 at 3:26 AM lovely, thanks

Wilma Neels September 4, 2011 at 2:10 AM This is really beautiful Johnny, took me away to another place ;) Wilma

Wole Francis September 3, 2011 at 7:41 PM this is lovely.keep it up.