A Hound Dog Tale Premiere Contest Winner

As the 
story
goes...

A
pesky
fly, 
came buzzing by
to rest and munch
and eat his lunch
and have some fun
on the hound dog's 
nose.

The old dog
snoozed 
without a clue
in the noontime heat
of the August
sun.

He
napped
awhile
by piles of leaves
in dappled shade
of the apple tree,
where an apple fell
and the flies said "yum"
and the bees would hum
and the dog would yawn.

That lazy bone
won't fetch a stick,
or scratch his neck
or care a lick 
about a neighbor's cat,...

That ornery
brat
will prance around,
will tease and taunt
the weary hound,
who naps so sound
on
this
dog- day
afternoon.

Hound has no pep
to take a step
to chase
or race
that snooty 
cat,
who
smugly rubs
against his back,
and sticks her nose
up to his snout,
and
sticks up her tail 
sashays about.

He hardly cares
that she is there.
She preens and cleans 
her own black spots,
She stares at him
he stares right back,
with one eye open,
one eye shut

He'll stretch a bit
and scratch a lot 
but it's too
hot 
to 
chase 
that
cat...

Don't
bat
your
eyes..
it's 
not a lie.

So
what
do
you
think
of
that?



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Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 5/31/2016 3:50:00 PM
A delightful story poem! I can easily picture the scene in my mind. Congrats on your 1st place win with this sweet write, Carrie! Love, Kim
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Date: 5/25/2016 7:59:00 AM
Love your poem. Intend to read it to my grandson. Yes, must shape the up and coming generation. We've had collaborations. He is an avid cat lover and is 7 yrs old. Congratulations, Carrie!
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Date: 5/24/2016 1:07:00 PM
Hi, Carrie. Congratulations on you top win! I love your beautiful poem narrated in a playful and humorous way. The flow of words is consistent until the end. You have deserved this win with your superb talent. Hugs, Andrew.
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Date: 5/21/2016 7:21:00 PM
Congratulations Carrie, great win...
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Date: 5/21/2016 5:12:00 AM
Congrats, I thoroughly enjoyed this one.
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Date: 5/20/2016 2:00:00 PM
I loved it! Congrats on the great win!
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Date: 5/20/2016 12:46:00 PM
Pretty good, Carrie. I love it. Congrats. Deserves the top shelf.
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Date: 5/20/2016 10:47:00 AM
What a delightfully sweet and pleasant poem, Carrie! I love it! ~ Worthy of its first place in the contest...congratulations! ~ Regards // paul
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Date: 5/20/2016 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on your beautiful first placement in the contest. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
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Date: 5/20/2016 9:09:00 AM
Congrats Carrie.
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Date: 5/20/2016 8:20:00 AM
Adorable, Carrie, and I liked the beat as I read it. Congratulations on your First Place win in the Poetry Soup contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:50:00 AM
A fantastic win with this cute tale (tail) Carrie! ; ) congratulations on your super win! #7
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Date: 5/20/2016 1:32:00 AM
Wow congrats Carrie you topped the charts with this one:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/7/2015 6:57:00 PM
Oops, forgot to rate. Seven+ and fave list!
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Date: 8/7/2015 6:52:00 PM
Hahaha! I LOVE this! So comical and totally original. Congrats on your well deserved win, my Dear! xoxo
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Date: 8/6/2015 5:38:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie
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Date: 8/6/2015 10:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved win a 7 , Carrie, I'm that lazy dog in this got weather. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/6/2015 5:47:00 AM
What a witty write Carrie - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 8/6/2015 1:02:00 AM
Carrie, Congrats on your Hot, hot win. Love SKAT
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Date: 8/5/2015 11:29:00 PM
Carrie loved ur sweet witty write, congrats on big win!
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Date: 8/5/2015 9:53:00 PM
Carrie, this one had me chuckling throughout. I have seen similar episodes of hot dogs and steamy cats annoying one another from shady shelter. Thanks for entering the contest.
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Date: 5/19/2013 9:39:00 PM
this is a nice poem, CONGRATS!! SKAT
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Date: 5/18/2013 8:35:00 PM
Congratulations with your impressive winning word play poem, CARRIE... Take Care <3 xox <3 LINDA
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Date: 5/18/2013 1:21:00 PM
Stunning! Congrats on your win Carrie. AO
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Date: 5/18/2013 8:08:00 AM
a fun write and read. congrats. randy
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