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A Hot Time In Auckland City

“METROPOLIS BLUES” The elemental wind curls in from the north east, sublime salon creations in disarray, in grimy profusion inventiveness subsides. The town clock strikes out, within ear shot, a bench seat plays host to a cast of thousands. Soon! succulent rotting form to be replaced by concrete. “A dental job needed for those poor little mites?” Corrugated iron picturesque in shades of autumn, rattling in regimental disorder, a haunting requisition for regeneration. Rogue waves spill over the quay, reducing feathered messengers to squatters alms. Honking horn for the many that miss “Cross now.” Hot profanity escapes in sheer frustration, diamond studded ladies, gents in pin stripe suits reduced to gutter sniping, intellectual street wise gnomes aroused by verbal definition. Skywards, elevated glass menageries, a product of inner city germination casts out buoyant clouds, plays yo-yo with minute window cleaners, perched precarious in prefabricated isolation. One does get lost in Duty Free! Polyglots strutting between glass cabinets, exemplification of exaggerated personification! No English! Here, yet many tongues in resonant sounds, reverberating throughout the confused clamour. Idiot in pearly white “BMW” Snookered in “Victoria Street” came in “Off the black” Seven points away, no consolation for the hot “Mini Cooper” all concerned carried away under flashing lights. “Cardless head banger” In aggressive mood, his four numbered digits he had forgot, so the machine decided to take the lot! Shades of the fifties roll on by, silver wheels impeccable against an opaque sky. “Boom boom ‘John Lee Hooker’” drifts into contention a competitive participant within the metropolis; as aren’t we all!! © Harry J Horsman 2012

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Date: 9/19/2012 10:27:00 AM
Beautifully descriptive! Auckland? Are you from New Zealand?
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Date: 7/31/2012 8:29:00 PM
Gosh, I don't know of this city, but I sure can envision many things from reading your vivid descriptions, Harry. That is your forte, your wonderful descriptive language. How are you lately? I see you a little bit here and there at Soup. Hope you are able to be here longer and longer! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 7/22/2012 1:53:00 PM
Interesting lines penned..Creative work..Sara
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Date: 7/20/2012 10:09:00 PM
Are you uninspired these days Harry, miss you butcame to have anotheer look at this great one. Hope you are doing fine and happy! Luv, Lizzie
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Date: 7/19/2012 9:03:00 AM
Wow I can see it al and l have not left the sofa, well done, missed you, are you back? xx
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Date: 7/17/2012 4:26:00 PM
Here I have a hot day in Turkey to day.30-40 C - Boom - Bang - Bong <> Congrats on your win Harry - Very well done!!! - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/16/2012 7:40:00 PM
Miss readinjg your poems - hope to see you back soon.
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Date: 7/14/2012 2:33:00 PM
what a bang, harry!.. congrats on your win!..:) huggs!
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Date: 6/18/2012 12:02:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie's contest Harry. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/17/2012 2:31:00 PM
A verbal BLAST of heat, a firecracker write, too many good phrases to list! wonderous! Congrad's on your win, Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2012 12:17:00 PM
I never think of Australia as crowded and dirty but with wide open spaces and endless vistas. Should I thank you for bringing me back to reality Harry, it seems such a waste to change my view! Love your descriptions though, so vivid!
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Date: 6/7/2012 12:32:00 AM
Well done Harry! - Have a lovely day in sunshine! - oxox Anne-Lise
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