Notes About The Poem

A Hopeless Romantic

meandering
along the hinterland
relentlessly I search 
for innocent love
in the remoteness
of unspoilt territory…
a hopeless romantic
making inroads into
inaccessibility

- - - - - - - - - - - - - -
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Crabtree Avatar
November 21, 2020 at 4:08 PM
Perfect words and picture for a hopeless romantic. You have presented it well :)
Callus Avatar
November 24, 2020 at 2:08 AM
Many thanks, Angela; pleased you enjoyed. Regards // paul
Parveen Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 1:49 PM
A breath of fresh air Paul, very romantic.
Callus Avatar
October 16, 2020 at 3:22 PM
That is such a lovely comment, Tahira....thank you. Regards // paul
Gavala  Avatar
April 16, 2020 at 5:17 PM
It is as deep, emotional and beautiful as the photo. I like it!
Callus Avatar
April 18, 2020 at 12:32 PM
I love your comments, Almudena...muchas gracias. // paul
Raven Avatar
March 25, 2020 at 8:01 PM
Ah, such gentle words, Paul. I am ever the hopeless romantic, reading your wonderful lines I feel joy in the heart. My mind takes me into such unspoilt thoughts. You shall never lose any of your skill, Paul. Your pen shall ever run gold, my friend. A definite fav. Have a wonderful Thursday. Your friend always....Mike..
Callus Avatar
March 29, 2020 at 5:46 AM
I am sure I had replied to this awesome comment of yours, Mike! You never fail to encourage and support with your most welcome visits, my friend. Have a nice day...and stay safe! // paul
Manassian Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 3:52 AM
Awwwwww.... you sweet dear romantic, you. Beautifully penned.
Callus Avatar
March 7, 2020 at 2:29 PM
Thank you, Eileen...I know you love romantic! Looking forward to reading a new passionate poem from your pen! Hugs // paul
Macfarlane Avatar
March 2, 2020 at 10:00 PM
Lovely romantic write Paul. Hugs
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 12:41 PM
Thank you, Cecilia. Hugs // paul
Proxenos Avatar
February 29, 2020 at 9:59 AM
Meandering along the hintereland in unspoilt territory and making inroads into iaccessibility - even a hpeless romantic can't find unspoilt regions or a utopia. However an innocent love will appear where one least expects it.This is a powerful write Paul. Blessings hugs and warm regards. Jennifer.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 12:45 PM
You choose your words well, Jenny:) Thank you for your continuous support. ~Warm regards & hugs // paul
Godwin Avatar
February 27, 2020 at 4:19 PM
How profound - a real thinking poem of depth whose simplicity speaks volume. I enjoyed the read very much. Regret I haven't been around more, it's just so hard to find time to be here, there and everywhere on Soup. Please know that I ALWAYS enjoy reading your talent, Paul. Poetry hugs ... CayCay
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:00 PM
Thank you so much for these lovely comments of yours, CayCay. I understand that it's not easy to keep up with all the poets and poems, especially when there are other priorities in life which require your attention. Knowing that you enjoy my poetry is ample satisfaction for me. ~ Regards & Hugs // paul
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 3:49 PM
I too am hopeless..... romantic
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2020 at 3:49 PM
really really good work and just how I like them, SHORT too!!!
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 12:43 PM
Thank you for both comments, Andrea. I have a feeling that many poets are hopeless romantics!:) Regards // paul
Y. Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 9:12 AM
Hi Paul, You’ve penned such a well written romantic write. Nice imagery as well. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:21 PM
Thank you so much, Alexis. Glad you enjoyed. Regards:) // paul
Agustin Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 5:44 AM
Thanks for sharing this, poetically expressed. Meanwhile, we thank God for offering us His great, gracious, genuine love. God bless you.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:22 PM
Thank you, Beata. Goodnight and blessings to you, too. // paul
Duet Avatar
February 24, 2020 at 8:25 PM
What a lovely and romantic scene you paint with your expert pen, Paul. I can see you now "meandering" through the forest green...just like I do.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 1:31 PM
Thank you for your lovely feedback...you are too kind, Carole. Warm regards // paul
Laurie Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 5:57 PM
Hello Paul … life should be all about looking ahead. What is not found today, may be found tomorrow - thank you Paul - Lindsay
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 4:02 PM
I like your positive attitude, Lindsay:) Thank you for stopping by. Regards // paul
Devonshire Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 1:49 PM
Wow, your poem and photo go perfectly together, Paul. But I never think of you as a "hopeless" romantic. You seem more like a hopeful romantic! Beautifully penned, my friend. I'll be sending you a regular email. Hugs, carolyn
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 3:01 PM
Thank you, Carolyn. Probably you are right; I know that love isn't all chocolate hearts and rose petals! Love & Hugs // paul
De Beaulieu Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 5:41 PM
Hello Paul, yes I would call that a hopeless romantic. I think there a re many like this out there. Regards Darlene
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 2:33 PM
I agree with you, Darlene; hopeless romantics do exist, though to be fair we ought not be disillusioned by false ideals of love!! Thank you for visiting. Regards // paul
Turner Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 10:34 AM
If I was meandering in that photo, I'd be in love! Really nice, Paul.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 4:07 PM
Thank you, Danny. I'm still playing at catching up on late replies! Regards // paul
Riabi Dziri Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 9:52 AM
You crafted your words in a brilliant way making the inaccessible attainable by your reader.. joining an insightful poet in his quest for "innocent love"!.. Pure Love always finds its way to its roots, its home, its souls.. Love does find us, we do not look for it.. hence its "inaccessibility"! Great work of Beauty, Paul! and an immense pleasure to read. Best regards. God bless you.
Callus Avatar
March 4, 2020 at 4:17 PM
It is always an immense pleasure to read and savor your beautiful comments/feedback, Besma...something I look forward to. Thank you! ~ Warm regards and blessings // paul
Yvonne Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 9:17 AM
Stunning!
Callus Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 3:00 AM
Thank you Armand. Good to see you around again! Regards // paul
Pandit Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 8:44 AM
Beautiful poem Paul--there is pure love in unspoiled territory--heavenly when we find it. Enjoyed the read.
Callus Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 4:12 AM
Thank you, Vijay. Unspoiled territory has much to offer, but very often it's not accessible. Regards // paul
Cunningham Avatar
February 22, 2020 at 7:51 AM
But we keep on looking, we never give up dispite knowing it will probably end in disaster. Tom
Callus Avatar
February 23, 2020 at 4:11 AM
Thank you, Tom. Some look for love...others for hidden treasure...!! They have a lifetime to make their dreams come true! Regards // paul
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace