a hiku

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repost of one I originally had titled "As Our World Spins"

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a record spinning as the song plays itself out

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Paige Hind

Date: 4/21/2025 9:39:00 AM

Very interesting - :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 4/21/2025 12:29:00 AM

Great:)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/20/2025 2:37:00 PM

Ahh!! Reads like a good contender to me if for a contest. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K

Edward Ibeh

Date: 4/18/2025 5:25:00 AM

Nice one, Andrea!

Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh

Date: 4/17/2025 9:45:00 PM

Deep and beautiful ,symbolising something cyclical,and song progressing unfolding memory.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 4/18/2025 10:12:00 AM

Thanks, Akham.

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 4/17/2025 5:38:00 PM

Good one Andrea.