A Heaving State Of Bliss

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Beams of sunlight caress our naked skin ever so softly, through the leaves of trees. And feelings of ecstasy stir within; as summer breezes titillate and tease. A warm sensation cocoons two lovers in a sweaty blanket of prickly heat. And immodesty kicks back the covers; exposing a tangle of arms and feet. Passion's pulse sets the rhythm for two heartbeats that merge into one and begin to race. And with bated breath, these fevered athletes acquiesce to each other's sweet embrace. And melt into a heaving state of bliss; punctuating their feelings with a kiss.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 5/31/2018 1:45:00 PM
Sweet, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 6/1/2018 8:59:00 AM
Thanks so much Line, I appreciate you comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/19/2018 5:41:00 AM
A beautiful sonnet of love. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/19/2018 9:11:00 AM
Thanks Susan, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/18/2018 8:23:00 PM
A beautiful sonnet of steamy summer love, Emile. Lovely rhythm and rhyme enhance your vibrant imagery. I especially like your closing couplet. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes ~Susan
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Date: 5/19/2018 9:12:00 AM
Thank you Susan, your comments are appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/17/2018 8:55:00 PM
You always know what I'm looking for Emile, well done, again another win in my contest!
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/18/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thanks John, you honor me my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/17/2018 7:35:00 PM
Beautiful love sonnet, Emile. Many congrats on your win. Elaine
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/17/2018 7:39:00 PM
Thank you Elaine, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2018 11:12:00 AM
Another very visually invoking writing. Also, great rhythm and imaging. Inspiring.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 5/10/2018 12:37:00 PM
Thank you David, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/10/2018 9:26:00 AM
Very passionate , well written sonnet! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 5/10/2018 10:27:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I can always count on you to encourage me my friend, Emile.
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