A Haunting Tale

A splintering wood staircase, a dilapidated door to an old Gothic-type mansion. I stood before an unfamiliar dwelling, totally betwixt as to how I had gotten there. Startled, I began to rise, floated up, the entrance seeming immediately to dissolve, allowing me free unfettered ingress. Then I began walking haltingly down a dismal corridor, eerily lit; passing illuminated cutouts in the walls, both sides of me, unnerving windowed enclosures. Scenes one would expect to see at a serpent or spider exhibit. A dimly lit, cave-like atmosphere. A funnel of consuming darkness. View after view, were accompanied by hideous cries of pain, a grotesque harmony. Each theme was of a similar skeletal landscape, which I surveyed in pitiful sequence. Topography where leafless trees, with elongated trunks and limbs that were the extremities of once independent, living beings, had become trapped, rooted in an otherwise barren, forsaken dimension. Desolate. Suffering, emaciated creatures struggling to free themselves from what appeared a hellish captivity. Reptilian hisses...desperate articulations demanded of me: "Priest, why are you here!? Light as we have never seen before." My reply, "I do not know... I mean you no harm. Please, do not fear this intrusion." At the end of the hall unaided parted a curtain, myself feeling propelled deeper into unfathomable terror, pushed forward by an unseen protagonist with the evil essence of a far-bleaker, danker, unholy colony. In the center of the room, on the floor swiveled a medusa head, with undulating serpents for hair, gaping mouths dripping venom. "What do you want with us," authoritatively questioned the hideous amputation. I responded, "Please, do not fear me. I mean you harm. I don’t have the slightest idea as to how I arrived here, nor why I was sent. "Paul Lucius David. Do you know this name?" More sternly, the fiend demanded: "Paul Lucius David, do you know this name?"-- seeming now perplexed as I. "I truly do not know of whom you speak," my honest response. "Hmm…you will come to know this name. You will come to know this name." And just as mysteriously, I was back, seated on the edge of my bed.
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Buhagiar Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 2:54 AM
A great story. You use words perfectly to lead the reader to Halloween. You did well. Your transition to a dream is perfect.
DiMino Avatar
October 30, 2025 at 6:38 AM
Hi Victor; a positive comment from such a fine story teller as yourself, is special to me. Thank you, my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 7:26 PM
Hope this Halloween will not be a 'Hollow Win,' Joe. lol. ~ Trik O Lantern
DiMino Avatar
October 29, 2025 at 4:28 AM
A bit of a silly holiday. With all the real terror in the world, we certainly do not need to manufacture anymore. Nigeria exterminating Christians like aunts. 10's of thousands around the world brutally slaughtered last year, simply for being Christian. Sparse coverage by the American press. Interesting history about the use of Jack-o-lanterns or carved out vegetables with lights in them. Irish Folk Law I believe.
George Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 1:10 AM
So haunting and creepy ! It is neither a fantasy nor a nightmare, but combining both. Joe your fertile imagination has worked out something so fitting for the Halloween spirit.....
DiMino Avatar
October 28, 2025 at 6:45 AM
Thank you, Valsa; very much my intention, to present something a little different...phantasmagorical! If you are having one, have a great Halloween party. Ila and I are inviting a bunch of old friends...at our age, appropriately most of them long passed away:))
Rose  Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Oh Boy that was creepy, was this a true story ? turned fiction ? if it was I hope you got out fast ...
DiMino Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Hi Vie; I was not afraid at any time. What I felt was great sympathy and sorrow for the torturous circumstance these entities seemed forced to endure. They behaved afraid of me or what had sent me. All a mystery to me. Thank you for taking time to read. It is the spooky season.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 12:06 PM
WOW!!! "A Haunting Tale" is some write/story you have here. I enjoyed reading this one. We do Not do Halloween. "Good Luck" If for a contest. Have a fun day writing away..............
DiMino Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 6:36 PM
So pleased my tale held your interest. Thank you, Paula. Have a great writing day!
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 7:43 AM
- That sounds like a horrible nightmare, Joe - You opened the gate to "The House Of Evil "... - Skillfully and captivatingly written :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
October 27, 2025 at 8:21 AM
Sounds like it. But why? What was the haunting purpose? Oh well, Halloween. A couple of days, many visits. Can be an enlightening season. Thank you, Lisa. Thought it was a bit long for anyone to read. Have a great writing day!
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