A Haunted House Fiasco

My wife and I went to a haunted house
Where monsters jumped out and said,"Boo!"
Running through a maze of canvas walls
At a dead end, so what should we do

Suddenly, a chain saw started up,
And we saw a guy with a mask on!
At least I know that I saw the guy,
But I also saw Judy was gone!

I heard her yell, "Pat, I'm over here,"
"On the other side of the wall!"
He was getting close, it was real loud
I knew not, how she got out at all!

Then on one side I saw a small ditch
A hasty exit I had to make
I don't guess I'll ever forget how
She slid quick, under there like a snake!!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Roper Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 4:03 PM
Love your poem, Pat.. I great imagination.
Adams Avatar
August 22, 2018 at 6:04 PM
Thank you Eve. Yeah, I'm weird like that!!.......80)
Hoffman Avatar
October 30, 2017 at 8:59 PM
Good thing you both got outta there Pat; what did the guy think you were both trees, lol! Scary stuff Pat!~Che :)
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October 31, 2017 at 7:31 AM
Ha! You are soooo funny!! Maybe he DID think we were trees!!........NAH.......80)
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