Notes About The Poem
06/25/19
Your Choice V
Tenth place
Contest by Brian Strand
A Happy Haibun
Dear, this is my last errand to you. I met you in my
last phase of life. I admit, it was better late than never. You are
the only woman in my life possessing free mind with pleasing
personality and wonderful wits. Our acquaintance turned to close
friendship. I enjoyed your companionship in full. I relished intellectual
pleasure to my utmost in our interactions.
I perceived how much deprived was me till I did not know you.
Gradually I got emotionally involved with you. Both of us had own family
neither to disturb or to disrupt by any means. Now, confined in
bed I am waiting for last bell to ring.
don’t feel sad my dear
enjoyed your charm and love-
leaving happily.
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