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A Hand To Hold

He took my hand to help me 
climb the mountain path.
  Once we reached the crest,
  he held me within his arms.
    The only view I wanted to see
    was the glimmer of love on his face.


July 28, 2022
Short Verse Inspired by Pictures Contest
Sponsored by Lisa YY
Photo Prompt C ~ Word Count at 37

happylovemountainsfree verse

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Frederic Parker

August 1, 2022 at 10:52 AM

tender, poetic, and in the end a warm smile in an exchange of emotion...

Jenna Logan

August 1, 2022 at 12:34 PM

Thanks for reading and commenting, Frederic.

Valsa George

July 31, 2022 at 9:26 AM

'Waiting to see the glimmer of love on his face' .... ! What a way to end the climb together. Beautiful and romantic, Jenna!

Jenna Logan

August 1, 2022 at 12:34 PM

Thanks, Valsa. Climbing a mountain with the one you love and trust would be fabulous.

Timothy Ray

July 29, 2022 at 12:34 PM

ahhhh a Romantic poet....such a delight and so true to form...the quick capture of the heart....line by line excellent execution....take a bow, you sit with the Le Bon Ton of the Romantics

Jenna Logan

July 30, 2022 at 2:19 AM

Guilty, as charged. Thanks so much for the kind comments you've bestowed on my lines, Timothy.

Terrell Martin

July 29, 2022 at 5:22 AM

Jenna, the photograph was well chosen but IMHO, not in the least bit needed because the poem expressed that "Kodak Moment" better than any photograph ever could. To me, it incapsulated a tender, loving moment in time. Arete' (Greek for "Excellence."

Jenna Logan

July 29, 2022 at 5:43 AM

Thanks so much for your kind remarks, Terry. The photograph was a necessary part of the contest theme.

Deb M

July 28, 2022 at 9:34 PM

Just beautiful Jenna! Debx

Jenna Logan

July 29, 2022 at 2:55 AM

Thanks a lot Deb.

Michael Tor

July 28, 2022 at 7:24 PM

Jenna you transformed the mountain view to your affection for him in priority and purpose of the climb. Forget the view and got caught up in the surreal moment of affection and love. The purpose of the climb, the view was secondary and your affection toward him was more important. Clever way of highlighting the search of love in his adoring face. Your romantic side shines in this well crafted clever way, of expressing this romantic Free verse of affection. The Spirit of love shines in you...

Jenna Logan

July 29, 2022 at 2:54 AM

Thank you so much for your very insightful review, Michael. Your comments read me as if you were on the mountain. I appreciate your thoughts

Edward Ibeh

July 28, 2022 at 3:01 PM

Mesmerizing! Love it, Jenna:-) I almost went with this pic for the contest. Best of luck in the contest!

Jenna Logan

July 28, 2022 at 5:22 PM

Thank you, Edward. I was curious as to which photo you chose, so I read your lines. They were awesome, and I'm sending you a soup mail.

Anne-Lise Andresen

July 28, 2022 at 12:21 PM

- Lovely ... <3 - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan

July 28, 2022 at 5:21 PM

Hi Anne-Lise. Thank you very much.

John Watt

July 28, 2022 at 10:29 AM

Jenna, such a winsome romantic moment you depict in only 37 words. Love the arc from a helping hand to an embrace to the look of love at the summit. Enjoyed this very much. Hope your day is blessed ~ John

Jenna Logan

July 28, 2022 at 5:21 PM

Hey John and thank you for such a lovely review. My day was fine... cooler temps because of rain. I hope you have a great weekend.

L Milton Hankins

July 28, 2022 at 9:50 AM

Aw, this is so sweet, Jenna. Your interpretation gave meaning to the picture. I love it!

Jenna Logan

July 28, 2022 at 10:01 AM

I wanted to use the most unusual of the four pictures offered. I'm happy that you think my lines do it justice. Thanks a bunch, Milt.

Tom Cunningham

July 28, 2022 at 9:43 AM

Short and very romantic Jenna, love your interpretation of the picture. Best of luck and hope your days gone well. Tom

Jenna Logan

July 28, 2022 at 10:00 AM

Good afternoon, Tom. I was limited to using not more than 40 words, but you know me... I could've written a novel. lol Thank you and my day is comfy with a lower temperature since rain is on the way.

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