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A Halloween Haunt

Pulchritudinous looks, unscrupulous ways hook 
Junoesque one apart, pneumatic in mouthpart

Those coconut-like callipygian haunts cull
Leave alone howling wolves, despite being ourselves!

Copyright © Sara Kendrick | Year Posted 2023

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Hilo Poet Date: 11/10/2023 8:41:00 AM Hey, I got one--coconut, phew! Well, I blew off the dust from my thesaurus, Sara, actually only the Juno..., which I figured it leaned towards the Roman goddess. Interestingly enough, it left a grin for your witty spookology, my friend. Aloha, William Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 10/29/2023 6:53:00 AM wow, plenty of words there that I must confess I had to look up, LOL - lovely Halloween write Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/29/2023 8:41:00 AM I am glad you looked them up, Jack, and I hope they become some that you might use. LOL..I can't remember new words anymore, so I guess I won't be using them very much. Sara K

Sotto Poet Date: 10/22/2023 2:52:00 PM Superb use of language. Excellent use of words, really frightening fitting with the Halloween season. Best wishes, Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/29/2023 8:40:00 AM Why, thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate the visit and time spent commenting. Sara K

Valsa George Date: 10/20/2023 9:58:00 PM Great diction. Wonderful word choice.... quite spooky...well in keeping wirh the spirit of Halloween! All the Best dear Sara. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/21/2023 2:42:00 PM Valsa, I am glad you liked it and got the feeling of it being spooky. Thanks for the best wishes. Sara K

Kim Rodrigues Date: 10/20/2023 5:36:00 PM Very interesting, Sara! Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/21/2023 2:41:00 PM Why, thank you, Kim. I am glad you found it interesting. Sara K

Christina Bowring Date: 10/16/2023 8:29:00 AM A great, well written poem for Halloween Sara. Very clever. Love the title too. So enjoyed it. Thank you for sharing.:):) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/16/2023 2:10:00 PM Christina, Glad you enjoyed it, and all those smiles made my day. Thank you for dropping by ..Sara K

Victor Buhagiar Date: 10/15/2023 2:45:00 AM What a wonderful Halloween poem Loved it. Blessings. Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2023 5:59:00 AM Thank you, Victor. In simplicity he wrote, and it was loved by all. I need all the blessings I can get. Sara K

Hiya Sharma Date: 10/15/2023 12:37:00 AM Wow, this is such an amazing alexandrine poem, really haunting and bewitching, perfect for the Halloween vibe! I want to write a dark poem now mmm haha :) but truly, your vocabulary & wordplay, both are so immaculate here, with brilliant rhymes and flow.. "unscrupulous ways hook" Woah.. And that last line, really intriguing! Sending you love and poetic hugs :) Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2023 5:58:00 AM Why, thank you, Hiya. I appreciate the high praise. Life has its unscrupulous hooks all the time especially at Halloween with some people playing dirty tricks so I have been told. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith Date: 10/14/2023 1:58:00 PM A creative write/picture. Have a blessed weekend.......... Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2023 5:04:00 AM Why, thank for the wishes of a blessed weekend, Paula. I appreciate the review of my work. Sara K

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/14/2023 12:56:00 PM - On such a night, most are unscrupulous Sara :) - Smile :) - Well done :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2023 5:03:00 AM I think maybe they older ghosts and goblins are unscrupulous. Thanks for the nice addition to my comments. Sara K

Ink Empress Date: 10/14/2023 12:25:00 PM Oh thats a brilliant picture! Something i dont usually see and what a creative alexandrine this is! You rhymes are on point and i love the wordplay! I especially love “ Leave alone howling wolves, despite being ourselves” whoa! Powerful and artistic one that got my halloween spirit hyped! Love this, missed reading you Login to Reply Sara Kendrick Date: 10/15/2023 5:02:00 AM IE, Yes ghosts are usually kind of lean or lank or shapeless. Your comments add a special touch to my page. Sara K