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A HAIKU #2

an autumn preview- snowberries sunbathing in a Summer peepshow

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/10/2010 4:18:00 AM
Brian, I love the idea of a summer peepshow, made me ;) congratulations on your win, rgds Wilma
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Date: 9/2/2010 12:39:00 PM
Wonderful Haiku Brian, most desereved of it's win in the contest >> James
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Date: 9/2/2010 8:32:00 AM
nice one , congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 9/2/2010 4:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Brian in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol
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Date: 9/1/2010 9:46:00 PM
REally nice, Brian. Long time no see. Congratulations!
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:53:00 PM
Congratulations on the win in summer contest, Brian. You are not seen much on PS, Brian.
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Date: 9/1/2010 6:01:00 PM
Brian, Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT
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Date: 9/1/2010 5:15:00 PM
Congrats Brian on your win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory..luv..
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Date: 8/30/2009 10:22:00 PM
So little says so much, good one Brian...Karla
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Date: 8/30/2009 5:34:00 PM
another gift from God along with the flowers that waited so long to bloom. i'm at the age where i'm finally noticing. john
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Date: 8/30/2009 2:11:00 PM
Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Brian. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/30/2009 12:36:00 PM
You're right, of course, summer's signals, many would say fall's signals, but that would be wrong, it's summer's signals of fall approaching. Brilliant Brian!
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Date: 8/30/2009 9:54:00 AM
This is a wonderful line, most original, just a charming picture. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín
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Date: 8/30/2009 8:54:00 AM
Yes Yes Yes !!! How I long for your poetic thoughts to rush to me,...the cold days are just fantastic to me,....aside from the beautiful spring !!!!! Great poem Brian !!! james
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Date: 8/30/2009 8:43:00 AM
yes! I noticed fall berries on trees during my walk yesterday! bright, beautiful monoku! Brian! jimmy
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Date: 8/30/2009 8:16:00 AM
this is original..your work impress me everytime--to my favs--charma:)
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