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A Haiku #2

an autumn preview-
snowberries sunbathing in
a Summer peepshow

seasonsautumnhaiku

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/10/2010 4:18:00 AM

Brian, I love the idea of a summer peepshow, made me ;) congratulations on your win, rgds Wilma

James Fraser

Date: 9/2/2010 12:39:00 PM

Wonderful Haiku Brian, most desereved of it's win in the contest >> James

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/2/2010 8:32:00 AM

nice one , congrats on your win in the contest

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/2/2010 4:19:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Brian in S K A T *s contest "Summer Is Over". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/1/2010 9:46:00 PM

REally nice, Brian. Long time no see. Congratulations!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/1/2010 6:53:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in summer contest, Brian. You are not seen much on PS, Brian.

Skat A

Date: 9/1/2010 6:01:00 PM

Brian, Congratulations, and thanks for the wonderful entry. Had fun reading all the amazing Summer Haiku*luv~SKAT

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/1/2010 5:15:00 PM

Congrats Brian on your win in the Summer Haiku contest... awesome words my friend.. enjoy another sweet victory..luv..

Karla Null

Date: 8/30/2009 10:22:00 PM

So little says so much, good one Brian...Karla

John Loving Iii

Date: 8/30/2009 5:34:00 PM

another gift from God along with the flowers that waited so long to bloom. i'm at the age where i'm finally noticing. john

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2009 2:11:00 PM

Here it is Sunday and the begining of a new week is upon us. And August is leaving us way to soon. I am enjoying reading such excellent poems today and am happy to see your poetry among them Brian. May your pen forever flow. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 8/30/2009 12:36:00 PM

You're right, of course, summer's signals, many would say fall's signals, but that would be wrong, it's summer's signals of fall approaching. Brilliant Brian!

Deirdre Omaidin

Date: 8/30/2009 9:54:00 AM

This is a wonderful line, most original, just a charming picture. Regards: Déirdre Ó Maidín

James Peranteau

Date: 8/30/2009 8:54:00 AM

Yes Yes Yes !!! How I long for your poetic thoughts to rush to me,...the cold days are just fantastic to me,....aside from the beautiful spring !!!!! Great poem Brian !!! james