A Haibun Memory

Remember that scrawny little tree in the front yard. A tiny shade for the children to play on summer days. Its protection of wide limbs adorned with green still remain firmly planted. Fifty years have really brought about change with thoughts wondering what will come next. The tree is no longer a sapling clinging to the hillside for it securely holds back floods, wind, rains. spring rains bring rivers flowing to the creek and sea deep roots help sustain Slowly that sapling grew higher, spread its strong limbs, caught the cool breeze, rebuked the sun's strong rays. It has survived through several minor tornadoes and continued to grow reaching many feet taller than the home it has protected. In each spring its tassels of chartreuse green release pollen that irritates eyes and nose. We have lived to experience the growth of that tree with its changes each season.. bare limbs exposed naked come alive with buds popping.. allergy season Summers brought life to the red oak. The bright yellow sun, summer rains and thunder storms made it stronger each year. The pointed green leaves fed the tree with nutrients necessary for survival. Now English Ivy runs up the trunk higher each year. Could this suck the life out of the strong sturdy tree over 50 years old? Will great grandchildren dig at its roots with their shovels and fill their buckets or swing in the shade of this grand oak? laughter echoes now down the hollow to the creek.. fall's cool days outside Winter is on its way once again. Will a noreasterner rattle your aging limbs and rip some of them away causing serious damage to your weakening limbs and roots? Trees are unpredictable no one knows what the future holds. We can only live in the moment for that is all that we have to hold onto. rain and winds still come autumn with many gray days.. acorns rain 'pon the roof
Written over several days November 6, 7, 8, 9, 2015 Inspired by contest of Charolette Jade Puddifoot Finis'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 11/23/2015 9:19:00 PM
This is fine nature poetry. You create an evocative picture with your words here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
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Date: 11/19/2015 5:51:00 PM
Glad I saw your haibun. I love trees and you gave a grand tribute for this one. My decorative pear tree was so big and beautiful and a very strong storm took 1/4 of her side off her. I just hate seeing her total beauty now gone. Keep hoping the lost side regenerates . Is it possible?
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Date: 11/16/2015 8:28:00 PM
Sara, this string of haibuns is wow!!! splendidly written!! i love the haikus~Olive Eloisa =`)
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Date: 11/15/2015 2:16:00 PM
Oh I really like this Sara! Beautiful imagery and brilliantly written! #7
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Date: 11/11/2015 3:31:00 AM
Wishing you the best of luck. Sara, outstanding imagery. SKAT
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Date: 11/8/2015 9:16:00 AM
keep it coming, sara...i love trees except for the rush of pollen that increases my allergy... enjoyed the flow and deep connection with nature.. huggs
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