A Growing Need

Like dawn in heat
 I am already slave to your loins
 our impending collision
 the meeting of body and mind
 immanent

A gentle run of tongue
 shimmers parched rims,
 lost fingers are confused
 with buttons and holes

Slowly fabrics are rent
 falling to retire in shreds
 letting shadow and light
 rest on the fusing of our skin

The rod of your desire
 is arched to my wetness
 as buds tip your lips
 my mouth parts

descending to my knees
 your shaft slides down my cheek
 discovering my mouth...
 and the guttural sound of sin 

A moving campaign
 of desire, mind bending waves
 traveled all the rooms with a view
 unbridled hands, roamed
 without thought of destiny 

The whole of your intent
 is rapaciously introduced to heaven
 overwhelmed and conquered
 I am now a lost continent
 awaiting your next expedition

And suspended in
 a pure vacuum of ecstasy
 so exquisite it rests on my soul
 I am imprinted for all time 

... through the window
 an icy breeze dimples my skin
 and I lay in amber light
 humming...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 7/27/2014 12:45:00 PM
Um, excuse me a moment would you dear? Gotta go take a cold shower followed by a blood pressure pill...Written in your own unmistakable and brilliant style...I now dub thee queen of erotica of the Soup - Tim
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Date: 6/19/2014 8:34:00 PM
You had me wondering which holes you were talking about, when fumbling for those buttons. Very saucy indeed.
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:04:00 AM
lol you were meant to wonder about buttons and holes lol thanks glad you liked it ...love Jayne x
Date: 6/12/2014 8:37:00 PM
A poem as hot as HOT can be!!!!!! BBBravooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:03:00 AM
Thank you Robert, curtsey lol....love Jayne x
Date: 6/10/2014 9:45:00 AM
A journey of love and lust exposed to sensual pleasure that leads to suspended ecstasy. A strong expression of desire and release. excellent! // paul
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Paul Callus
Date: 6/20/2014 1:02:00 PM
Ahhhh...but I can still see a purring Cheshire cat:)
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:02:00 AM
Ahhh Paul you can see the journey I was trying to take you all on, its not just about lust there is so much more here than just if you read into it, thanks for your comment its very appreciated...love Jayne xxx
Date: 6/9/2014 2:26:00 PM
Hot N Spicy!!! Excellent write indeed!
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Pace, it is hot and spicy huh ? lol ....love Jayne
Date: 6/9/2014 8:26:00 AM
Absolutely wonderful poem!!
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Arthur Vaso
Date: 6/20/2014 2:37:00 PM
I am glad you did, its still a work of art!!!
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Jayne Eggins
Date: 6/20/2014 10:58:00 AM
Thanks Arthur I am glad you liked it I wasn't sure if I should post it or not it is a little racy lol love Jayne xxx
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