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A Green Pride Has No Ambition Now

Walk with me, till moon rises on the griefs of the dark, and the tongue tastes the pain of centuries. On the erected dome when the golden leaves start a flame which throws up an image of a prophet. My nightingale was giving a call of a very sad tune, on the death of peacocks - but for the poisoned feed, they were dancing. A green pride has no ambition now, roses were wilting. Fever was rising in the roots. Do not give it to me, my award. Could I have shut up like a fame when my house was being ransacked? SATISH VERMA

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Date: 2/7/2010 10:29:00 AM
This is truly a great poem and deserves to be featured. Reading this poem make me believe that there is still poetry left in the world. Satish, this is your immortal verse, it has open the annals of history to you as an English poet. Well done, my sage friend.
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Date: 2/6/2010 11:30:00 AM
ABC's of an awesome featured presentation here Satish. Congratulation on a fine feature. Sincerely, Moses
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Date: 2/2/2010 11:49:00 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece. Rgds Janette
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Date: 2/1/2010 1:52:00 PM
Many congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James
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Date: 2/1/2010 5:42:00 AM
Contrats to you on being featured by PoetrySoup this week. Keep pen and paper on hand & never say never! AR
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Date: 2/1/2010 4:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poetry this week Satish. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/31/2010 5:22:00 PM
Good use of imagery for a creative view. The emtion comes through your words. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/31/2010 2:48:00 PM
Congratulations Satish, on having your very interesting poem featured this week. I like the way you called it an ABC poem and then in the last stanza said, "Do no give it to me, my award." Each word entices the mind and seems to have an underlying depth... saturated with some kind of sorrow. I'm not sure what. But the poetry is very good. Keep writing. Lovingly, Dane
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