A Great Big Unseen Pointed Finger

The difference in saying you,
a great big unseen pointed finger, or we.
I didn’t know. Some figurines
wave while others scrutinize with wizened eyes.
The analytic panics, hairs raised by static.
The simple leans in to catch butterflies. One is cynical.
The other sensuous. One slaps your hand away.
One squeezes it. Personality
like the word itself broken in pieces, a flotilla.
In the storm the words like jigsaw waves.
In placidity, the sun’s too hot or doldrum’s ebb and flow. 

We will make it!

Still, even in this exchange, coarse sand,
a castle with a moat. Your motives sought - there I go again
“Y O U R…”
Sisterly size-up. Am I trying to win? I didn’t know we were preparing to arm wrestle. I’m unshaped, neither the flat piece of a puzzle or linked. The dreamy sky from the beach. Salt in the air, eyes on the horizon, lap of the waves — the same lift I feel when swinging high and higher. The excitement of adventure, no one’s judging my every word. I’m breathless…it’s breathtaking when my feet float above the ground. There I’m in the arms of love. There I point and God answers with his digit reaching out, touching mine. I am reborn by the finger of God. We will make it! 12/19/2020
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Brul Avatar
January 15, 2021 at 5:47 PM
The feeling when you are lifted and you breathe the freedom... the fresh air....so refreshing!!! Congratulations...
Rodrigues Avatar
January 16, 2021 at 9:33 AM
Thank you JCB
Michael Avatar
December 30, 2020 at 10:20 AM
Yes, we will...Congratulations Kim Rodrigues on POTD...Well done.
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December 30, 2020 at 4:22 PM
Thank you, Arturo! Happy New Year!
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December 25, 2020 at 12:35 PM
Congrats on POTD.
Rodrigues Avatar
December 25, 2020 at 7:33 PM
Thank you!
Romios Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 12:41 AM
Nice! Panagiota Merry, Merry
Kitchin Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 2:36 AM
Thanks Tom, a pleasant surprise. You are also mentioned in my poem, Merry Christmas to you!
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December 20, 2020 at 9:00 PM
WoW! Kim, Excellent message of hope and encouragement.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:23 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Lindley Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 8:30 PM
Yes we will make it -- with faith and perseverance. Congratulations for your POTD! A fav..... God bless and Merry Christmas to you..
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Thank you, Robert! Merry Christmas to you with abundant blessings from God!
Roper Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 3:36 PM
I never thought of myself as a figurine, but so true. We are all in one way shaped or sized by our action how people view us. Praise the Lord that we are reborn by His finger. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:24 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Koplin Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 2:31 PM
Beautiful Kim! Congratulations on POTD!!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:25 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Nicole Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:24 PM
God is Spiritual and the reference to a "Pointing Finger" Simply means He is All Knowing and Powerful. "We will make it" A very comforting thought. With Him, All things are Possible. Matt. 19:26. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:29 AM
Thank you for a wonderful comment, Brandy! Congratulations!
La France Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 10:27 AM
Kim, excellent writing and a big congratulations on POTD _Constance
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:30 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Hankins Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 9:59 AM
A lot of work went into this fine poem. You are to be congratulated for a tour de force...this POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:30 AM
Thank you, Milton!
Watt Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 9:48 AM
So much imagery! You covered a lot of emotional ground, Kim. Loved the finger of God image, reminds me of Michelangelo's Sistine Chapel painting. Beautiful, thought-provoking, and well worthy of POTD. Congratulations and enjoy the honor ~ John
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December 21, 2020 at 3:31 AM
Thank you, John!
Wolf Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 9:24 AM
The long arm of --- LOVE touched you there. Beautiful image, Kim. Congrats on POTD. Peace on Earth, Gershon
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Peace and blessings to you!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 8:29 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!!! You said so much here. I love your lines, "and God answers with his digit reaching out, touching mine. I am reborn by the finger of God." The finger of God is on each one of us. A "Wonderful" write. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
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December 21, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Thank you so much, Paula!
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December 20, 2020 at 8:25 AM
Kim, congratulations on POTD!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:33 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 4:52 AM
Hope this sticks. It's my third attempt to congratulate you on your POTD. I'm so glad for you, my friend. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:42 AM
Thank you so much my friend!
Pandit Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 4:46 AM
Congrats Kim on poem of the day--this one feels deep in thoughts. Well done!
Rodrigues Avatar
December 21, 2020 at 3:43 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Mcintosh Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 2:11 AM
Again, I love this. C ON G R A T U L A T I O N S on POTD. God bless you
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 3:58 AM
Thanks so much, Regina!
Cunningham Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 1:09 AM
Thought provoking verse Kim, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 3:58 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Buhagiar Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 10:20 PM
A deep poem. Life comes from God. The finger of God is always at work. ~~
Rodrigues Avatar
December 20, 2020 at 3:58 AM
Thank you, Victor!
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December 19, 2020 at 7:18 PM
I'm so Unwise when discovering hidden meanings between the lines of poetic works, but am so "in love" with this brilliant, evocative, heavenly write. I love it. A fave. God B L E S S you always
Rodrigues Avatar
December 19, 2020 at 7:47 PM
Thank you, Regina! Heart to heart poetry sisters! God bless you! :)
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