A Great Big Unseen Pointed Finger

The difference in saying you,
a great big unseen pointed finger, or we.
I didn’t know. Some figurines
wave while others scrutinize with wizened eyes.
The analytic panics, hairs raised by static.
The simple leans in to catch butterflies. One is cynical.
The other sensuous. One slaps your hand away.
One squeezes it. Personality
like the word itself broken in pieces, a flotilla.
In the storm the words like jigsaw waves.
In placidity, the sun’s too hot or doldrum’s ebb and flow. 

We will make it!

Still, even in this exchange, coarse sand,
a castle with a moat. Your motives sought - there I go again
“Y O U R…”
Sisterly size-up. Am I trying to win? I didn’t know we were preparing to arm wrestle. I’m unshaped, neither the flat piece of a puzzle or linked. The dreamy sky from the beach. Salt in the air, eyes on the horizon, lap of the waves — the same lift I feel when swinging high and higher. The excitement of adventure, no one’s judging my every word. I’m breathless…it’s breathtaking when my feet float above the ground. There I’m in the arms of love. There I point and God answers with his digit reaching out, touching mine. I am reborn by the finger of God. We will make it! 12/19/2020

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Date: 1/15/2021 5:47:00 PM
The feeling when you are lifted and you breathe the freedom... the fresh air....so refreshing!!! Congratulations...
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 1/16/2021 9:33:00 AM
Thank you JCB
Date: 12/30/2020 10:20:00 AM
Yes, we will...Congratulations Kim Rodrigues on POTD...Well done.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/30/2020 4:22:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo! Happy New Year!
Date: 12/25/2020 12:35:00 PM
Congrats on POTD.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/25/2020 7:33:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 12/21/2020 12:41:00 AM
Nice! Panagiota Merry, Merry
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 12/21/2020 2:36:00 AM
Thanks Tom, a pleasant surprise. You are also mentioned in my poem, Merry Christmas to you!
Date: 12/20/2020 9:00:00 PM
WoW! Kim, Excellent message of hope and encouragement.Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:23:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 12/20/2020 8:30:00 PM
Yes we will make it -- with faith and perseverance. Congratulations for your POTD! A fav..... God bless and Merry Christmas to you..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, Robert! Merry Christmas to you with abundant blessings from God!
Date: 12/20/2020 3:36:00 PM
I never thought of myself as a figurine, but so true. We are all in one way shaped or sized by our action how people view us. Praise the Lord that we are reborn by His finger. Congratulations on POTD. Hugs Eve
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:24:00 AM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 12/20/2020 2:31:00 PM
Beautiful Kim! Congratulations on POTD!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:25:00 AM
Thank you, Mark!
Date: 12/20/2020 1:24:00 PM
God is Spiritual and the reference to a "Pointing Finger" Simply means He is All Knowing and Powerful. "We will make it" A very comforting thought. With Him, All things are Possible. Matt. 19:26. Congratulations Kim, on Poem of the Day. My best to you. ~ Brandy
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:29:00 AM
Thank you for a wonderful comment, Brandy! Congratulations!
Date: 12/20/2020 10:27:00 AM
Kim, excellent writing and a big congratulations on POTD _Constance
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 12/20/2020 9:59:00 AM
A lot of work went into this fine poem. You are to be congratulated for a tour de force...this POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:30:00 AM
Thank you, Milton!
Date: 12/20/2020 9:48:00 AM
So much imagery! You covered a lot of emotional ground, Kim. Loved the finger of God image, reminds me of Michelangelo's Sistine Chapel painting. Beautiful, thought-provoking, and well worthy of POTD. Congratulations and enjoy the honor ~ John
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:31:00 AM
Thank you, John!
Date: 12/20/2020 9:24:00 AM
The long arm of --- LOVE touched you there. Beautiful image, Kim. Congrats on POTD. Peace on Earth, Gershon
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Peace and blessings to you!
Date: 12/20/2020 8:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. WOW!!!! You said so much here. I love your lines, "and God answers with his digit reaching out, touching mine. I am reborn by the finger of God." The finger of God is on each one of us. A "Wonderful" write. Enjoy your win with blessings..............
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank you so much, Paula!
Date: 12/20/2020 8:25:00 AM
Kim, congratulations on POTD!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:33:00 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Date: 12/20/2020 4:52:00 AM
Hope this sticks. It's my third attempt to congratulate you on your POTD. I'm so glad for you, my friend. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:42:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend!
Date: 12/20/2020 4:46:00 AM
Congrats Kim on poem of the day--this one feels deep in thoughts. Well done!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/21/2020 3:43:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay!
Date: 12/20/2020 2:11:00 AM
Again, I love this. C ON G R A T U L A T I O N S on POTD. God bless you
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2020 3:58:00 AM
Thanks so much, Regina!
Date: 12/20/2020 1:09:00 AM
Thought provoking verse Kim, congratulations on POTD, enjoy the honour. Tom
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2020 3:58:00 AM
Thank you, Tom!
Date: 12/19/2020 10:20:00 PM
A deep poem. Life comes from God. The finger of God is always at work. ~~
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/20/2020 3:58:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 12/19/2020 7:18:00 PM
I'm so Unwise when discovering hidden meanings between the lines of poetic works, but am so "in love" with this brilliant, evocative, heavenly write. I love it. A fave. God B L E S S you always
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/19/2020 7:47:00 PM
Thank you, Regina! Heart to heart poetry sisters! God bless you! :)
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