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A Gray, Sunless Day

A gray sunless day. Heavy rain flagellating my bare-necked crying soul.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/8/2014 7:58:00 PM
what a great way to put it!!! I hate days like this. Surely it is flagellation!!
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Date: 12/5/2012 9:32:00 AM
Lines one and three very good. Line two spoilt by the word flagellating
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Date: 12/5/2012 12:38:00 AM
WOW! What depth of emotion. Very well worded!
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Date: 9/22/2012 2:34:00 PM
very powerful! I like this one very much. thanks for your nice comments. warm thoughts, Ralph
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