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A Gray Heart

Holding waves of gray
Swimming in the sky today
Grey ceiling above
Floating over highest heights
Going high up overhead

Love can be quite volatile
From sunny blue to gray skies
The heart can seem to be grey
When love finds impeding gloom

Russell Sivey

Form: Tanka + Verse

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/8/2012 11:07:00 PM

Your consistency is what gets me! I mean you BRING IT EVERY DAMN TIME! Commenting on poems is not my strength, but your stuff is pure! Andrea told me your stuff was the bomb, but I did not know if you'd be able to keep it solid. You are gold in my book. Another fave poem/fave poet 7 up and all that Shitake! :)

Don Johnson

Date: 1/7/2012 6:59:00 PM

ah yes but let the sun shine through, discard sad thoughts like mountain dew, rejoin the human race, life n living yet to do, some place :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/6/2012 5:28:00 PM

Moody blues, well done Russell, all the best, Brenda