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A Gray Heart

Holding waves of gray Swimming in the sky today Grey ceiling above Floating over highest heights Going high up overhead Love can be quite volatile From sunny blue to gray skies The heart can seem to be grey When love finds impeding gloom Russell Sivey Form: Tanka + Verse

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 1/8/2012 11:07:00 PM

Your consistency is what gets me! I mean you BRING IT EVERY DAMN TIME! Commenting on poems is not my strength, but your stuff is pure! Andrea told me your stuff was the bomb, but I did not know if you'd be able to keep it solid. You are gold in my book. Another fave poem/fave poet 7 up and all that Shitake! :)

Don Johnson

Date: 1/7/2012 6:59:00 PM

ah yes but let the sun shine through, discard sad thoughts like mountain dew, rejoin the human race, life n living yet to do, some place :)

Brenda Victoria Northeast

Date: 1/6/2012 5:28:00 PM

Moody blues, well done Russell, all the best, Brenda