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A Good Deed Gone Bad


A Good Deed Gone Bad


Of many jobs my hubby had
    along with one full-time,
was pallbearer for funerals
    whenever it worked fine.

One day there was a huge request
   from owner of the place.
A man who died was cremated;
   no next of kin to trace.

However, 'twas his dying wish
   to scatter ashes wide
in local river close to home
   and begged that they abide.

And so my hubby volunteered
   to honor his last wish.
And to our home, he brought the urn
   with Mr. James Crawfish.

Now it was winter when he passed,
   the river froze with ice.
So in our den lay James Crawfish
   'till weather became nice.

Then one spring day a friend we knew
   took hubby with the urn
on his speed boat to ashes cast
   with serious concern.

And as he did, a tail wind whipped
   and ashes covered all!
His wife would never ride with him
   again after that squall.


Sandra M. Haight

~9th Place~
Contest: Pink Domino 
Sponsor: Sara Kendrick
Judged: 07/29/2016

True story except the name of deceased was changed.

Rules: Humor.  Up to 7 stanzas (28 lines) with rhyme on  line 2 and line 4 of each stanza plus use 8 syllables, 6 syllables, 8 syllables, 6 syllables.
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Dutta Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 9:08 AM
Congrats Sandra to win on your wonderful poem. Hugs.
Kendrick Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 8:38 AM
Your wonderful work got my attention! I am so glad to place it in the winners’ list..Congrats to you. Sara
Misra Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 6:58 AM
Congrats, Sandra. Quite an amusing tale - the last lines were terrific. ~karam~
Allison Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 3:50 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Sandra:-) hugs Jan xx
Arnone Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Love the name, Mr. James Crawfish! Is this a true story, Sandra? Very nice. Congrats. Also, last stanza, line one: change has to as.... :-)
Haight Avatar
July 30, 2016 at 8:36 AM
Yes, Tom, this is a true story (except that I changed his name to Mr. James Crawfish). I appreciate your finding my typo, and I have corrected it! Thank you for that and for your positive comment and congrats! Sandra
Medders Tobechi Avatar
July 29, 2016 at 1:06 PM
Morbidly funny. I have heard of so many calamities happening with ashes in urns. Congratulations on your placement.
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 6:56 PM
made me smile Sandra - I want my ashes scattering at a place quite close to home ... but it is on a coastal hillside - so whoever scatters them will have to choose a very calm day or else the same thing could happen lol:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:31 PM
Yes, Jan...definitely no wind! Hugs, Sandra
Hoffman Avatar
June 23, 2016 at 9:05 AM
I think that would be my last urn boat outing too, lol!:) Funny and sad at the same time!:)
Haight Avatar
July 20, 2016 at 7:29 PM
Yes, Cheryl, for sure. Thank you for stopping by with your supportive comment. Sandra
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